The Creation of the Undercity

Knight7770

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Where is that? I wouldn't want to be misunderstood.
EDIT: I found it. It was supposed to be assess; but I forgot the last s.
 

thewrongvine

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lol, k. asses, what who said that? i mean assess of course. o_O

Knight, can you look in the Members Projects place and look at my new thread.
 

Knight7770

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lol, k. asses, what who said that? i mean assess of course. o_O
No one said it; it was the narration.
Knight, can you look in the Members Projects place and look at my new thread.
I did. Unfortunately, I still can't host :mad:
 

Syndrome

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lol, this is going to be fun :D
so this is like a beta read before you start expanding things? thats cool :p
and, yes PLEASE! use my arm idea, i want a good laugh lol.
 

thewrongvine

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I wonder what he's gonna do...

me wastn expand! ??? lol

another great...short chapter
 

Knight7770

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Lol...thanks :D It's kind of obvious what he's not going to do, though.
 

Knight7770

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Update! Chapter 4 has been added :D
 

thewrongvine

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lol, cool chapter and very vivid and descriptive. So many adjectives and stuff to describe what is going on. Besides the shortness, I think this is your best chapter so far. But I would suggest combining chapters 3 and 4 together since they both deal with the same ideal.
 

Knight7770

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lol, cool chapter and very vivid and descriptive. So many adjectives and stuff to describe what is going on. Besides the shortness, I think this is your best chapter so far. But I would suggest combining chapters 3 and 4 together since they both deal with the same ideal.
Ok, I combined them. The new chapter 4 should be out sometime soon; I hope.
 

Knight7770

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I've made a small-ish update; including the fourth chapter. Enjoy; and expect the rest of the chapter to be available to you soon :thup:
 

thewrongvine

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Oh boy, what's Sylvannus gonna' think? :D

Finally chapter 4, lol.

Maybe you could make them a little bit longer.
 
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