Update
I will still be editing the series, I have completely threw away my 1st introduction to my short story, and I will be rewriting it, because I have changed the outline.
lol, you threw it all away? How long was it? Well, Ark's Mark... the name is certainly interesting. The intro is also, but it seems a bit unoriginal (with all the "gift that might be a curse" thing). Let's hope the writing itself makes it good.
I. Hate. the. 48. Hour. Wait. Time. Period.
seriosuly, why make you wait 48 hours before posting stories?
leave ur 1st intro on lol, from the sounds of things, its like Code Geass a bit, where a guy gains poewr to avenge someone blah blah blah...
Its actually almost based on that Anime... (But it has major differences in what there powers are and he will also be hunting, Ark instead of using him as a ally)
Well, I have the first section of the first part (It doesn't have chapters, so I have to use other words )
I am just not extremely happy how it sounds like at the moment, but by this weekend. (Tomorrow or Sunday) I will have posted something...
Although its based off of Code Geass, besides him hunting down Ark. Unlike Code Geass, the power doesn't eventually corrupt you or overwhelm you. The Power will certainly bring bad luck...
Even the title is a double meaning, Ark's Mark refers to the marking on some part of your body, you get when you make a pact with Ark. Also Ark's Mark means the damage Ark has done on the world, and/or your life. By the Way if any of you are wondering Ark looks almost like This
Offtopic Edit
- WTF is right, 817 views xD
You people must really want me to post this
Deleted Post merged...
Added Story to fiction press, this is the actual introduction; I plan to add more.
well its just a draft XD
Anyway, I rewrite it again (Right Now Actually)...
But to hold you over... I wrote a quote that Ark will say; "The Curse of Immortality is that you must bear the weight of living and the pain of death for all eternity" - Ark
I completely redid the Intro again, this will be the last time I will redo it for a while anyway. I did major grammar checks, but if anything is wrong. Please just PM or post in in the thread.
After about 2 hours of editing and adding notes to stuff... I realize I missed out of a lot of details I was planning to do originally and the major prologue :thdown:
(2-5 pages could be added to each segment depending if I use the notes or not...)
So editing will begin for Segments 1 and 2 and Segments 3 and 4 will be up soon :thup:
It'll be good practice at least, I did a bunch of practice boards the last few weeks but that's a bit different than actual repair. It's pretty obvious what's going on with those, so it's not very hard to trace the leads, and they aren't designed with faults so
Site is peaking on traffic for the recipes - Sundays are always the big days and we are 200 plus unique visitors an hour right now and it will be like that probably be around 3000 total on the site all day maybe more if Google desires it LOL
Anyway I have a power bench that I don't actually know how to use, but I'm assuming I can take the battery out and power it directly from that to see if any of them turn on.
If you had kids like me that grew up in that era you could just go to your closet and fish out one of the cords from the cord bag. I bet I have everyone of those cord connectors plus some