You sir, win!
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Btw, we should definitely revise the next four chapters we've done before posting them. Get vine!
And yes, 87 average. FML.
Yea, yea I get it.
Now, finish YOUR 2nd chapter lol, it's your turn = =
all right, we finally posted it. it is done.
It's up. Gotta finish my chapter now - -.
You.
Post it up.
Nice, I like it.
Some minor grammar errors, and general things I'd say is to vary your vocabulary (like you use "illuminated 3 or 4 times in this first page, maybe say 'light up' or something) and keep your tenses right, you sometimes switched from past to present, etc.
Anyways, it's great and suspenseful. The ending there was good, like a lose-win-lose-win thing o.o :thup:
Hows the you know wut wut going
It's not for sale anymore.
Yo. Let's post it.
:O I wait ur orders.
NOT
lol, alright can't wait,
yo, stop hogging my internet you n00b.
ok, tmr ill show you something.
AND you DID get miz involved...
no more people man, it's not cool when more then two person beta's it.
...of course you would -rolls eyes-
sent it to your email, check it over.
I am sorry I just have bad personal memory. Could you please remind me who you are, please Don't feel insulted by this. <3
crap, gave you the incomplete version, hang o-
you're not involving miz too are you?
hi?
it's almost done
almost...
Idk... I think... jk ehehe.
K, I await teh new one.
You make the post, you've got the first chapter anyways.
That's after he's done betaing. -
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vypur85:
Missing this place much. Wish that WE is still a thing now, just like the past when everything was so active. -
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vypur85:
Everything you do is pretty much observed. There are eyes everywhere... They can even read your Wechat texts if they want to...
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vypur85:
But it's pretty much safe here. Walking alone in the middle of the night in weird dark alleys is completely safe...
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jonas:
Haha, I remember taking a taxi in Beijing last year and the cabbie lectured me about how safe China is compared to America, then he made a gun with his fingers and pretended to shoot in the air while making "pew pew" sounds -
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vypur85:
Hmm i don't receive any pm? Maybe I'm using my phone. Gonna check it out using my pc later.
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jonas:
You should see a "private conversations" tab in the chatbox, that's where I sent it to you+1
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jonas:
Is the school system in your country similar to Chinese school system? I could never imagine being a teacher in a Chinese school, what's expected of students and teachers is just so different from what I'd be looking for as a teacher
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vypur85:
A Levels is based on the UK syllabus offered internationally. So the syllabus is similar throughout different countries, taught in english.
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vypur85:
I can't speak or write or read much chinese... Too difficult....... Which also makes my life here in china a lil difficult.
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jonas:
I've been using the translate app a lot on my phone. take a photo, translate. take another photo, translate again
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jonas:
You came during the 0 covid policy right? How'd you get through quarantine? Did you have some help with the apps and green codes?
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