Something I'm hearing is that you don't really have a clear melodic line (which I tend to like). The synth you're using for the melody is kinda tough to really distinguish. Other than that though it's really nice and coming along well. I would try to to take the drums off the beat more as it could lead to some nice grooves. The mix is sounding great though.
Other than the fact that even having that source image saved on your computer would be a little creepy, the end result is pretty cool and artistic. haha