I agree with Ninva wholeheartedly, but there's just one phase that you should avoid. Don't use dictionaries to find rhyming words. Simpler lines like these is what gives poetry its life and its flow.
There are two major issues here:
GoG syndromes require the basis of strict parenting and illogical decisions from the guardians. Therefore, since not everyone is a possible victim of GoG, education still proves to be helpful towards certain people, which lead to the second main concern.
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Poetry: literature in metrical form
Sonnet: lyric poem of fixed form (14 lines, specific rhyme scheme)
In the end, sonnets are a part of poetry. Its similar to how haikus are part of poetry, but don't have the usual elements.
It would be better to vary between the two, as in poems and...
I'm on the second book, and I got to say it's been awesome. I can't help myself but skip the Dae chapters though. They're not very interesting, nor are the Bron ones.
Personally, I find name generators and what not somewhat backtracking. Unless you can derive it yourself in Latin and create some sort of deep meaning, its really not necessary. Its better just to create a name out of sound and roll along with it. Of course, when I'm really stuck, I just use...