I tried finding the one where if you look at it long enough it starts making EVERYTHING seem like its spinning but i couldn't find a repeating image of it so i had to stick with this one. should i find another optical ill.?
Duh! Spartans don't have emotions.
Okay... Legendary missions are insanely difficult... it's like worse than Halo 2. It takes me like 1:30 to 2:00 hours to beat a mission, I always kill everyone on the checkpoint, then right before I reach the next one, some guy pops up with explosives... ah...
Finally, Nice chapter, now I'm even more confused/interested, ha.
As for the descriptions... I haven't experienced anything like that either, hmm. Well in the first scenes, if it's in his point of view, and he's like all messed up in the head now, maybe the thing to do is to not describe things so well. Since he doesn't really know what's going on, plus when you wake up with all those lights in those rooms, it's hard to think. Like when I was younger I had a surgery and I woke up like "whaa?" and couldn't really remember anything. So maybe in order to describe it well, you have to not describe it well.
But it's good. :3