I'd ask a couple of questions:
First of all, does this only happen when using the spell against multiple units at the same time? Or does it happen only when you cast the same spell repeatedly on one unit? Or is it entirely random?
Is the unit still paused after the glitch occurs? How high...
This poem is awkward because the main character and his exploits are totally ambiguous to the reader. The last to lines are simple, but made undecipherable because they have no anchor to my reality, see? If you don't want to talk about it and want to make it more generic for the reader that's...
Work on that background! Link looks really copy and pasted on there with those fractalcloud thingers. I think it would look just as good on plain black, but to make it really good you need to integrate the background into the picture and blend the two together, and create a scene.
Obviously needs to be Shrunk'd and x5'd, posted cuz some people can't handle imageshack >.>
Let me know what you guys think; credit to Nintendo/Sakurai and his SSBB team for the original image.
I liked it, and you're 13 so I'll forgive the grammar errors (this time :D) but I think you're overclassifying it and pre-judging in many cases.
For instance, if you are always there for your friend, and your friend for you, what happens when your interests conflict? Are they not your friend...
I'm cutting you guys off from the booze lol. Rules notes: You're welcome to change anything you like, so long as you ADD to the story, and not just remove everything. This is not the add a sentence thread, it's the Story Rewriter Thread. This is also not the retarded kids thread lol, so I cut...
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First post is a single sentence.
Every successive post adds an idea or element to it.
No posting twice in a row.
The goal is to add as much as you can with as few words as possible.
Example:
1) We were standing in the rain.
2) We stood outside of the restaurant in the rain.
3) Two...