thewrongvine

The face position isn't to accurately placed. The nose/mouth should go slightly to the left a lil.
The panda shirt is also a lil off. Probably sliding the whole shirt position to the left a lil would be better.

Generally, it's kinda hard to tell from this preliminary picture. You probably should complete the clean outline first.

It looks fine but a lil dirty, as you said. A lil touch up might make it better.
In drawing, sometimes its best if you don't give up too quickly. Although you feel it's bad, but as you touch up, it will become nice and good to the eyes.

Use strong lines instead of sketchy ones. This is cartoon figure, so sketchy/breaking lines will not be suitable.

If you are not used to using a tablet, don't use it. Use pencil and paper, and scan.
Tablet is good when you're dealing with colours and touch up. Not so much for sketching.

Show me more of your updates.

Edit: If I find time, I can try to fix your drawing a bit. I'm a bit busy lately though.

Cool. You could just post the WIP in the Graphic Section and get some response and probably some inspiration from other members.

Then again, it's always good to post or ask comments from an art forum.
Post it up when you're done with it. Be waiting to C&C.

Been lazy in drawing lately also. I have the time but I guess it's better off to use the time to rest. Haha.
FML, I guess.

What course you're gonna take?

Hi. Been procrastinating.
Unexpected stuff came up.
Not in the mood for studies.
Tired.

Visiting TH just keep me occupied sometimes. To let go off things and stuff...

How about you? Been good, I'd say.

Shit.
Lost Cruiser Command terrain files. Just remembered.

Lost everything, backed up my school notes... and that's about it.
The virus spreads by thumbdrives as well, and imbeds itself into any recovery partitions you have...
Re-installing tons of crap now = =;

My computer was just violated by some retarded virus.
Spent 12 hours to fix this damn thing.
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ALL YOUR FAULT T______T

I've only played Dead Island, I haven't been able to get on in a week though. I've heard good things from both.

Have been working with this idea for a while now, fumbling it and tweaking it.
https://www.yousendit.com/dl?phi_action=app/orchestrateDownload&rurl=https%253A%252F%252Fwww.yousendit.com%252Ftransfer.php%253Faction%253Dbatch_download%2526batch_id%253DZUd2eW55d0lGOFR2Wmc9PQ
Tell me what you think!

so.. we will play in ~2 hours if your computer can hold up?

http://www.thehelper.net/forums/showthread.php/165772-TH-Mini-Tournament-Series-3-%282v2%29-Round-of-4?p=1366371#post1366371

For the most part from what you reported the only one with scheduling concerns is Vestras. So Message Slapshot136 and try to figure out what will work. You just need to notify him beforehand on what you want to do.
As far as I know - Try to shoot to play before 5pm EST for Vestras.

We needz to practice for the Craft of the Stars.

I had to restart my comp, and you wern't on when i got back so i thought that when you left you left for good. Fail

Hmm that's probably what it is.

There was a + after stating that you were online at the bottom of TheHelper.net's forum index page. Just curious =)

Hello there! I'm curious, why is there a + next to your name?

I'M ON NOW.
Get on Skype D:

Derp. I forgot that I've changed the e-mail associated with my battle.net account...
Whoops.

I added your SC2 through your email.
I wasn't sure if i remembered it completely right, was it [email protected]?