This is a FanFic I wrote for a contest on UrbanRivals.com.
Double or Nothing
“Look, I’m not saying we have to whack him, but we sure as hell can’t let him get up into that ring tomorrow,” Donnie said, grinding his cigar to an ashy pulp. He swirled the ashes around in the tray...
Thanks, I made the correction story=store.
As far as the mutant reindeer etc., that stuff was meant as a joke. As anyone who has ever been to a grocery store before knows, those National Enquirer magazines make up all sorts of retarded shit.
Aaha WrongVine I clicked this thread with the intention of saying the same thing.
As for these tips...
I'm not sure what qualifies Lambda to come and dictate how we should write.
Regardless, some of these tips are just plain bad.
These two tips contradict. Obscene words are part of...
Actually I changed the novel so it's radically different now. I plan on pursuing publication when it's finished, so I won't be posting it on here. However, as I rewrite it there will be large swathes of the old story that I won't use. I'll post them on here.
This is an excerpt from a novel I'm writing. I recently started doing some major rewrites and this entire part of the story has been excised. I hope you enjoy it.
The man in the black suit and tie flicked his cigarette into the storm drain. Water was swirling about in the street and it...