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  1. Halahan

    Something I wrote

    won't attach, and won't delete. hmm
  2. Halahan

    'The Switch'

    New short skit from our channel, hope you guys enjoy :)
  3. Halahan

    The Rap Game has Once Again been Taken Over?

    Obviously the music industry will never be the same haha
  4. Halahan

    Well

    coulda sworn... woops lol
  5. Halahan

    Well

    Very powerful, because it is so honest. Obviously some grammatical and stylistic mistakes, its going to happen in any work of any length, but it didn't take away from the story. (specifically from what I remember you used the word 'jest' when 'joked' would have fit better in a contemporary...
  6. Halahan

    Dusk and Memory / As I Walk Randomly

    good: ideas, themes present, rhyming, some of the writing. Especially since english is not your native language, this is very impressive How you could improve: The poem lacks rhythm. If you meant for it to be more of a free verse type poem, then no worries, if not, work on that. Overall its not...
  7. Halahan

    And life goes on.

    I enjoyed it! But I think it is rather literal, where you have a nice chance to be more imaginative with how you express this whole theme as well. Good concept, and well written.
  8. Halahan

    Apparatus // A Novel

    It could be an interesting movie or novel, but that is true of most ideas. It's really up to the writer. I'd have to see the prologue, or the first chapter, or some of the script I guess to elaborate or give further critique.
  9. Halahan

    Short Snippets

    Interesting. But so short of a snippet that it's hard to get into it in any sort of way. And I agree with KMilz, she should not be nearly so confused and emotional about this, or if she should be, then it needs an explanation why.
  10. Halahan

    Guardians of the Earth

    You would like to travel and see the world, but you love your home more? This is obviously a very literal translation, but that is how it appeared to me.
  11. Halahan

    What are you listening to right now? The Archive!

    The sketchiest song ever! haha
  12. Halahan

    mindless tirade

    Ninva, YOU'RE awesome. I love it.
  13. Halahan

    Hope Springs Eternal - Emma Watson Video

    thanks, thanks, and ah well aha I was going for just a chill, matter of fact type of thing, not like actual acting anyway :D
  14. Halahan

    You liked my video and you are THE HELPER so that is awesome, thank you my man:)

    You liked my video and you are THE HELPER so that is awesome, thank you my man:)
  15. Halahan

    Hope Springs Eternal - Emma Watson Video

    The main guy in the video? That is actually me lol :)
  16. Halahan

    Hope Springs Eternal - Emma Watson Video

    FireCat, I'll take it:) haha thanks
  17. Halahan

    Hope Springs Eternal - Emma Watson Video

    It's half the reason I made the video! haha glad to hear you appreciate it
  18. Halahan

    Hope Springs Eternal - Emma Watson Video

    Sometimes those crazy and odd ideas you have... you follow through on... like this... :) by the by, who got all the different references to things?
  19. Halahan

    Ten thousand kings are stepping over me

    awesome. as hell. lovin it.
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