Poetry And life goes on.

Discussion in 'The Writer's Corner' started by KMilz, Jan 7, 2014.

  1. KMilz

    KMilz You can change this now in User CP.

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    Drifting through life
    Searching for meaning
    We find it in the places we go
    In the things we see
    And the people we meet
    They become our meaning.

    And life goes on.

    When these things that gave life meaning
    The people, places and things we loved
    Leave us for the final time
    We know not which way to turn
    Searching for meaning
    Drifting through life.

    And life goes on.
     
  2. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    I enjoyed it! But I think it is rather literal, where you have a nice chance to be more imaginative with how you express this whole theme as well.
    Good concept, and well written.
     
  3. KMilz

    KMilz You can change this now in User CP.

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    Fair point. Thanks for the review.
     

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