Update
I will still be editing the series, I have completely threw away my 1st introduction to my short story, and I will be rewriting it, because I have changed the outline.
lol, you threw it all away? How long was it? Well, Ark's Mark... the name is certainly interesting. The intro is also, but it seems a bit unoriginal (with all the "gift that might be a curse" thing). Let's hope the writing itself makes it good.
I. Hate. the. 48. Hour. Wait. Time. Period.
seriosuly, why make you wait 48 hours before posting stories?
leave ur 1st intro on lol, from the sounds of things, its like Code Geass a bit, where a guy gains poewr to avenge someone blah blah blah...
Its actually almost based on that Anime... (But it has major differences in what there powers are and he will also be hunting, Ark instead of using him as a ally)
Well, I have the first section of the first part (It doesn't have chapters, so I have to use other words )
I am just not extremely happy how it sounds like at the moment, but by this weekend. (Tomorrow or Sunday) I will have posted something...
Although its based off of Code Geass, besides him hunting down Ark. Unlike Code Geass, the power doesn't eventually corrupt you or overwhelm you. The Power will certainly bring bad luck...
Even the title is a double meaning, Ark's Mark refers to the marking on some part of your body, you get when you make a pact with Ark. Also Ark's Mark means the damage Ark has done on the world, and/or your life. By the Way if any of you are wondering Ark looks almost like This
Offtopic Edit
- WTF is right, 817 views xD
You people must really want me to post this
Deleted Post merged...
Added Story to fiction press, this is the actual introduction; I plan to add more.
well its just a draft XD
Anyway, I rewrite it again (Right Now Actually)...
But to hold you over... I wrote a quote that Ark will say; "The Curse of Immortality is that you must bear the weight of living and the pain of death for all eternity" - Ark
I completely redid the Intro again, this will be the last time I will redo it for a while anyway. I did major grammar checks, but if anything is wrong. Please just PM or post in in the thread.
After about 2 hours of editing and adding notes to stuff... I realize I missed out of a lot of details I was planning to do originally and the major prologue :thdown:
(2-5 pages could be added to each segment depending if I use the notes or not...)
So editing will begin for Segments 1 and 2 and Segments 3 and 4 will be up soon :thup:
The bots will show up as users online in the forum software but they do not show up in my stats tracking. I am sure there are bots in the stats but the way alot of the bots treat the site do not show up on the stats
Anyway I need to get some of those sensors and two air pressure sensors installed before an after the filters, which I need to figure out how to calculate the necessary pressure for and I have yet to find anything that tells me how to actually do that, just the cfm ratings
And then I have to set up an arduino board to read those sensors, which I also don't know very much about but I have a whole bunch of crash course things for that
Another issue I'm learning is that a lot of the air quality sensors don't work at very high ambient temperatures. I'm planning on heating this enclosure to like 60C or so, and that's the upper limit of their functionality
Although I don't know if I need to actually actively heat it or just let the plate and hotend bring the ambient temp to whatever it will, but even then I need to figure out an exfiltration for hot air. I think I kind of know what to do but it's still fucking confusing
I don't think I'm dealing with quite the same pressures though, at the very least its a significantly smaller system. For the time being I'm just going to put together a quick scrubby box though and hope it works good enough to not make my house toxic
I do know this - xenforo dropped the ball by not keeping the vbulletin reputation comments as a feature. The loss of the Reputation comments data when we switched to Xenforo really was the death knell for the site when it came to all the users that left. I know I missed it so much and I got way less interested in the site when that feature was gone and I run the site.