Krys A Night
Writer
- Reaction score
- 26
Ayumi, there isn't much to work off at all. It's so short that I'm curious to know what it is, but there isn't anything there to really bring the reader into it. I would suggest some serious fleshing out of the story, tell what the "dream world" looks like more, add in more details other than just the moon wells and the faeries.
It seems like it could be a really good story, if you wrote more then maybe a reader could get into it more.
It seems like it could be a really good story, if you wrote more then maybe a reader could get into it more.