DiDdY
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If your going to turn it into a novel, make the chapters more then half a page long.
I see you used my background story, very nice. However how can you say that Vesius was the the head of the family, but make his father still alive? If the father was around, wouldn't he be the head?
It's up to you, I personally would imagine a Vampire family to be patriarchal, so the father would be the head. It is your decision though.