Death

Monsterous

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Death

"Before your eyes, your life is shown"
Thats what's said, when your to die
From joy to happiness, from shouts to moan
From good to bad, from true to lie.

At first you see, nothing at all
Then subconciously, shows thoughts
Then you see, your name in call
And struggles, which you rightly fought.

But eventually, you see your love
Her eyes, her beauty, her passion
More golden then a swan or a dove
And remembering her lust for fashion.

Then realising, you see black,
"Is this the end?" you may think,
However, death is but a crack
Back to the start, life's eternal link.
Notes:
I made it in around 15 minutes, i was bored and really wanted to do a poem - hope you like it :D
 

Miz

Administrator
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Good Poem
Aww I love a Happy Ending :)

Well its not really happy but less depressing then most death poems
 

Fatmankev

Chef, Writer, and Midnight Toker
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Yeah, I think the ending was really good, too. Nicely worded, although I didn't quite like the "lust for fashion" line, but that's just me. Way to go, bro, I enjoyed it.
 

Monsterous

In the Shadows, Lurking.
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I couldnt really think of anything to put for that line, but i guess you could interpret it as "A bit to remember of her" or "A bit of humor". Thats my opinion but thanks anyway :thup:
 
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