Is english not your first language? >_<
It's readable, but some parts could be improved, like "Do you see you" could be "Do you see yourself?" or "Does it bring past" to "Does it bring the past". Simple little things but the reason I ask is because well, commonly type like that
But it's good, I expected it to be more, elemental. But it's actually more emotional =D (Which for me is better)
I'm definitely waiting for Elements 2.