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Aside from poetry, this is what I'm really good at (i think), it doesn't matter when it's at school or at the mall, essay-writing makes me shine and get really high grades
This essay is more on a comparison between a vehicle and a human, and it goes away from the subject further down in the essay, hope you like it!!
Human life is run by many factors, or simply 'engines' of life. These organic engines help us survive yesterday, today and tomorrow. Such a complex organism like us is more likely to depend on a variety of organs to survive, and if we're complex organisms, we are more vulnerable. Consider the fact that a cockroach can survive an ownage dose of radiation while we suffer and die instantly with that amount. But no, you are not supposed to hate yourself with this handicap, nor should you even hate yourself under any circumstance.
We humans are like vehicles, you need to fill in some high-octane gasoline for your car to make it run any further, or else it will starve, and when vehicles starve, they stop, much like we do. If we don't eat an adequate amount of food in a day, then you're pissed off with a growling stomach plus health problems. Food is one of mankind's best friends, aside from dogs, cars or sports. Eat for survival!
The air we breathe is also essential and mandatory. Breathe people, breathe! Our lungs need oxygen, and not only that, holding your breath for excessive amounts of time may lead to a nasty ailment like hypoxia or the like. Inhale w/ your mouth and nose, vice-versa or one of the two. This is true because there are alot of circumstances and instances such as when you've got colds, had asthma or some insane kidnapper taped your mouth shut w/ duct tape or the like. This engine is called the lungs, and it's almost similar to the vehicle's exhaust/muffler.
If vehicles need an oil change, then we also need to urinate and bowel frequently. Unlike for vehicles, which only need to change their oil about a month or two, we should do urinating in an interval of 2-5 hours, or just urinate/bowel when you really need to go. These things are entirely different (I meant just changing the oil for cars while we actually excrete the urine).
A car that crashed in the guard rail needs a new bumper. This is the same for humans, but unlike for vehicles, which need external factors such as funding and parts to recover and etcetera, humans regenerate and heal over time. When you are injured or wounded or just had a small cut when you accidentally played w/ a knife, then you'll heal in time. But that totally depends on the wound itself.
One more thing, if people can ride into vehicles, then parasites, bacteria, viruses, sperm/egg cells or embryos can ride (or reside) within our body. Just don't strive to acquire parasites inside your body, it sucks and it feels uber sick. Be clean to yourself as much as a Ferrari needs it! You don't want a dirty trash collector, a lunatic or beggar ride in your car unless if you have the heart to help him out.
Oh, and when your car is sick, make some repairs into it or take it into an auto repair shop, just as you buy medicine from a pharmacy or consult a doctor.
Have a nice trip!
I'm not that good at writing as the way I see it (thanks if you say I'm a good writer), so I need constructive comments and criticism for this essay. C&C.
Thanks for reading!
This essay is more on a comparison between a vehicle and a human, and it goes away from the subject further down in the essay, hope you like it!!
Engines of Human Life
Human life is run by many factors, or simply 'engines' of life. These organic engines help us survive yesterday, today and tomorrow. Such a complex organism like us is more likely to depend on a variety of organs to survive, and if we're complex organisms, we are more vulnerable. Consider the fact that a cockroach can survive an ownage dose of radiation while we suffer and die instantly with that amount. But no, you are not supposed to hate yourself with this handicap, nor should you even hate yourself under any circumstance.
We humans are like vehicles, you need to fill in some high-octane gasoline for your car to make it run any further, or else it will starve, and when vehicles starve, they stop, much like we do. If we don't eat an adequate amount of food in a day, then you're pissed off with a growling stomach plus health problems. Food is one of mankind's best friends, aside from dogs, cars or sports. Eat for survival!
The air we breathe is also essential and mandatory. Breathe people, breathe! Our lungs need oxygen, and not only that, holding your breath for excessive amounts of time may lead to a nasty ailment like hypoxia or the like. Inhale w/ your mouth and nose, vice-versa or one of the two
. This is true because there are alot of circumstances and instances such as when you've got colds, had asthma or some insane kidnapper taped your mouth shut w/ duct tape or the like. This engine is called the lungs, and it's almost similar to the vehicle's exhaust/muffler.If vehicles need an oil change, then we also need to urinate and bowel frequently. Unlike for vehicles, which only need to change their oil about a month or two, we should do urinating in an interval of 2-5 hours, or just urinate/bowel when you really need to go. These things are entirely different (I meant just changing the oil for cars while we actually excrete the urine
).A car that crashed in the guard rail needs a new bumper. This is the same for humans, but unlike for vehicles, which need external factors such as funding and parts to recover and etcetera, humans regenerate and heal over time. When you are injured or wounded or just had a small cut when you accidentally played w/ a knife, then you'll heal in time. But that totally depends on the wound itself.
One more thing, if people can ride into vehicles, then parasites, bacteria, viruses, sperm/egg cells or embryos can ride (or reside) within our body. Just don't strive to acquire parasites inside your body, it sucks and it feels uber sick. Be clean to yourself as much as a Ferrari needs it! You don't want a dirty trash collector, a lunatic or beggar ride in your car unless if you have the heart to help him out.
Oh, and when your car is sick, make some repairs into it or take it into an auto repair shop, just as you buy medicine from a pharmacy or consult a doctor.
Have a nice trip!
I'm not that good at writing as the way I see it (thanks if you say I'm a good writer), so I need constructive comments and criticism for this essay. C&C.
Thanks for reading!
