Gamer Gal

[13lade619]

1280 x 800

Spoiler

just finished.. i think 3 hours (including rendering the girl)

first piece in a month or so... i think i'm getting rusty.
CnC... tell me if you dont like it, .

 

[tooltiperror]

The left arm looks a bit weird on the bottom.

 

[13lade619]

...that;s intended. i cut off the elbow then smudged it onto the lights.

 

[tooltiperror]

Thought so, but I still find it unappealing.

 

[Whitesock]

Whatever filter you used on the girl is overdone. It's giving a low quality plastic sort of look.

 

[Moridin]

^ Qft.

Note that parts of the render/background/foreground starts to get pixelated. I don't think this really goes with the theme as it should have a more high-tech, smoothness to it.

 

[Jimpy]

I thought the name/title/words could have been better not directly in the middle.

Renders good, shinys are overall pretty neat, I think you could have extended them to form a partial border for neat effect.

It looks awful posted on the site, but on the desktop it looks considerably better.

However, I agree with whitesock, theres a weird grundgey quality to it that appear over done.

As for choice of render, maybe I'm being picky, but she looks like a rape victim or something on the ground looking back, kind of dirty looking, ripped clothes, tethered in wires. Its just not very appealing visually.