Spellpack Ice Mage

[Demi666]

Hi my secound spellpack is here EDIT --->( I didt post 2 spells cuz they cant be "seen" cuz 1 is repet hits so i would need to record it if u wanted to see effects^^)

Intro

Solid Ice

Aura Of Ice

( no picture here cuz its an aura.. )

Icy Storm

anyways i hacvent had time to fix most spells so there is pretty much bug with them sometimes + u can see shadow of Blizzard Dummy units idk why
anyways leave comments myself i give it a 2/10^^

 

[elmstfreddie]

Just a note - Why does the mage have a roar buff lol (in your screenshot)

Edit > Erhm I can't even try all the spells at once T_T, but are any of the spells triggered? :S They seem like already existing spells that were edited!

(it's spelled "second")

 

[Demi666]

cuz its fun lmao i said it was buggy i gtg cu..^^

 

[Thanatos_820]

Just a note - Why does the mage have a roar buff lol (in your screenshot)

Edit > Erhm I can't even try all the spells at once T_T, but are any of the spells triggered? :S They seem like already existing spells that were edited!

(it's spelled "second")

I see.....

Solid Ice: I bet it's based off of Frost Nova, Demi666 could've set the movement speed and attack speed to -1,000%, while adding the Freezing Breath model to the buff of Frost Nova, with some changes with name and whatever.

The icon also needs to change, use Freezing Breath icon in Research Form, it will make the spell have an active border instead of a passive border.

Aura of Ice: Could've been called "Freezing Aura" or "Frost Aura", I don't know what the spell does, so I'm guessing that it slows the enemies nearby with frost. I'm also guessing that it was based off of Endurance Aura.

Blizzard as the icom eh? Use the Frost icon, may look like a stone of ice but it suits the aura in my opinion.

Icy Storm: What the heck? No information just like the last spellpack! Please give all the information so we can download it if they're all good.

 

[Demi666]

Solid Ice: I bet it's based off of Frost Nova, Demi666 could've set the movement speed and attack speed to -1,000%, while adding the Freezing Breath model to the buff of Frost Nova, with some changes with name and whatever.

The icon also needs to change, use Freezing Breath icon in Research Form, it will make the spell have an active border instead of a passive border.

Aura of Ice: Could've been called "Freezing Aura" or "Frost Aura", I don't know what the spell does, so I'm guessing that it slows the enemies nearby with frost. I'm also guessing that it was based off of Endurance Aura.

Blizzard as the icom eh? Use the Frost icon, may look like a stone of ice but it suits the aura in my opinion.

Icy Storm: What the heck? No information just like the last spellpack! Please give all the information so we can download it if they're all good.

thank you for being honest i think.. anyways thanks for liking aura of ice and i didt just chancge solid ice in object its 100% trigger if u wanna take ur time lazy boy and dl map and look it..?

 

[IKilledKEnny]

lazy boy

It's your spell pack, you should add description. Also PLEASE write clearer, especially when posting somthing like spell pack / tutorial / project and such.

2/10

Why would you post somthing that you think is bad?

Anyway, once you post descriptions I could edit this post to a more relevant comment.

 

[Demi666]

idk i posted it cuz it was my work... and im maybe not proud over this 1 but.. dont be so such a meanie


anyways alot of ppl liked my voodoo pack so..

soon butcher pack is coming

it will be better already checked so All Tooltips work and so hope u like it better
thanks for honesty

 

[Dreyfuss]

Oh god, my eyes! :banghead:

 

[InfectedWithDrew]

You have poor grammar...

Makes is -100 Celcius cold totally freezing the enemy and immobilizing it for 6 seconds and damaging it with 250damage

That makes practically no sense.

Also, your abilities are not original.

And your hero should start on a higher level.

1.5/10.

 

[Demi666]

i spell bad cuz i write fast -_- and i use much slang

 

[Thanatos_820]

thank you for being honest i think.. anyways thanks for liking aura of ice and i didt just chancge solid ice in object its 100% trigger if u wanna take ur time lazy boy and dl map and look it..?

It looks like you took your time about what you should say, instead of anything particullarly rude ...like last time you said to me...which wasn't very polite, especially to a child like me.

Actually, I've looked at the map a day later after my last post here, and it seemed to be that the Icy Aura was Endurance Aura with negative bonus. I only seen the other 2 triggered, but all tooltips have a lot of typos. I noticed that your Icy Aura tooltip had no description, only said that you didn't want to write. You know, you can copy some of the words in the preplaced tooltip description when it's shown when the hero learns it, then paste it to the description of your spell, so you're still writing, but not so much.

The hero level should be raised like in your last spellpack, you can't learn all of your spells to the maximum level at level 6. And it's ALWAYS recommended to put some information into the spell at all times, that's why somebody moved it somewhere else and was not approved, I think it was the lack of information that caused it.

And think twice, I'm not as lazy as you think -_-. Yes, I'm a bit lazy, but information comes first, even members of WC3 Campaigns ask for more information for a resource if it contains the lack of complete information.

i spell bad cuz i write fast -_- and i use much slang

Then if you do type fast, recheck your post or whatever you typed down at least 3 times, since you do make several typos (I just hope you don't show that you write the way you type). And why must people learn so much slang ? I mean...it's quite rude most of the time, and it's not "proper" English...so why bother learning? Not to be to rude, but drop the slang and use actual English, it does not make you cool in any way, if you think about it... Slang will only ruin your English speaking, like it will corrode slowly, your English level WILL fall if you use slang-only words instead. But no offense, this was only something you should re-think about.

I hope this didn't go too off-topic.