It's just like times used to be

Metal425

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There she is standing in the corner
I'm all alone, and she can't see
I want her attention
But she don't notice
It's just like times used to be.


She walks down the street
Her body glows as if she is a treat
She shines like Sun
She Moves like water
It's just like times used to be.

Written by Metal425
Comment, and critique.
It's very short.
I will add on to it tomorrow or sometime next week.
 

Fatmankev

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Nothing happened. Seems like it could have been good, but not a thing happened. I don't know much about poetry, but I believe that some sort of action would be a major component to this.
 
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