Melee Feedback and Judgement

What would you give this map (out of 5)

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Killfest2

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This is my second one of these types of threads - the aim for me is to get good feedback so I can create v1.1, as this map recieved little attention in other places I submitted it.

So, can you please pass judgement on this map, as I personally had qualms about submitting it, as I personally didn't feel it was up to scratch. Please give it a rating out of 5 (?/5), and why you voted (eg. errors, imbalances etc.)

Name: Corridor Isle
Genre: Melee
Suggested Players: 2 Players; 1v1
Size: Small
Tileset: Sunken Ruins
Description: This beautiful island has now been swamped by the rising seas over the last century, and only the highest hills remain dry. The native inhabitants have since left, replaced by wild animals who now guard this small piece of paradise.
Authors Note: This Sunken Ruins map is an inspired project, with a similar design to Plunder Isle by Blizzard in that it has the protected 'mountains' in the middle with expansions on them. This map is so fun to play because of all the intricate paths you can take to reach a place, but they aren't intricate to the point of confusion. Featuring some of my best Doodad work to date (Sunken Ruins is easy to Doodad and make it look really natural :p), this map has been tested and refined over 15 times, a record for any one of my maps!


If you fancy checking out my other 47 submitted melee maps, go to http://maps.worldofwar.net/users?id=216940.

Thanks,

- Killfest2

Before you jump at my neck and say this isn't submitted in the right place, and the right place is the Mamps Download Page and the Hosted Maps Thread, I would like to explain why:

This map isn't fully finished. Therefore, submitting it would lead to people believeing that this is the finished version, and that is not what I want to be portrayed.

As Jindo put it on MSN: "When you get GOOD feedback, put it on hosted mappers, when it gets enough bug fixes submit it"...
 
I really like this, it is quite nice layout and quite large with lots of battle room.

Ive voted 4/5 but i give it 4.5/5.

~Jindo
 
Thanks for the review. +Rep

I'll give anyone +Rep who gives a slightly-detailed review of my map.
 
Hmm im not a fan of 1vs1 maps but i took a look at yours i can say its quite good. The best part for me were the doodads that looked amazing as if bllizzard made them and i like the layout of the map and the battle field is a nice size. A very good map overall 4/5
 
Hehe... I couldn't help myself with this map ;) I played my friend (and won, but thats beside the point), We both agree its a very good map, 4/5
 
i like it

1. The doodad placement is execlecent it looks realy real.
2. The way you made the terrain owns. Room for battles little nooks and like
50 places for a last stand (not quoteing TheHelper.net project just saying what happened to me)
3. The whole feel of the map fits realy well mabey the only problem i see (this isnt gameplay problem) is that if its supposed to be partial submerged hills why are the shores cliffs? I dont see much problem with that even from a asthtic postion beacuse it would be cliffs that would unsubmerged jsut pointing out something that came to my mind while getting owned.

4.5/5


Comments (helpful? mabey, relevent? probley not, here? yes)

When i was battling i found a Mercanry camp and got ampifious turtle... hunting stupid undead and ruing into the water is just too fun! I got owned by a comperture normal though... im not terriabley good at 1vs1. Number 2 comes from hiding in my expasion behind a moon well wall with 3 archers 2 heros and a turtle lol. OOO and the rune of rebirth i got it from a creep camp i used it and i got a mur'gle guy! It was cool! He did 15 damage and run around! Iv never seen it before i dont think its in blizzards item tables...did you change that? If so its cool!
 
Whoah, awesome feedback. I quickly browsed over it, but will read it in-depth when I get a chance, and probably implement it into v1.1.

Thanks, +Rep.

- Killfest2
 
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