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Cocktails anyone?
- Reaction score
- 284
Chapter 8 - Sandra - has arrived.
Though much more emotional and more centered on Malcolm than a lot of other chapters, I tried progressing his torment and furthering his downward spiral, while introducing bits and pieces of his past.
What a big scar this beast can bring.
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And Hala, I'm not too sure that would work with this, mainly because I plan on introducing 'paradise' about halfway through the story. It's a complete mystery to all the characters at this point, (Malcolm doesn't know it's real) and I've chosen to keep it secret until the time is right.
If you're wondering what to see in the near future, a few of the next chapters focus more on outside characters working at E.N.A.X., or other important characters. Then you'll see the final straw that broke the camel's back, and then...well you'll just have to wait and see.
Though much more emotional and more centered on Malcolm than a lot of other chapters, I tried progressing his torment and furthering his downward spiral, while introducing bits and pieces of his past.
What a big scar this beast can bring.
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And Hala, I'm not too sure that would work with this, mainly because I plan on introducing 'paradise' about halfway through the story. It's a complete mystery to all the characters at this point, (Malcolm doesn't know it's real) and I've chosen to keep it secret until the time is right.
If you're wondering what to see in the near future, a few of the next chapters focus more on outside characters working at E.N.A.X., or other important characters. Then you'll see the final straw that broke the camel's back, and then...well you'll just have to wait and see.