Please Help Jugde This Terrain

How Good is This Terrain?

  • 5: Perfect, stunning terrain.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • 4: Very Good, but could use a touch up.

    Votes: 8 20.5%
  • 3: Good, but could use some editing.

    Votes: 17 43.6%
  • 2: Average, not very good, should have some work on it.

    Votes: 12 30.8%
  • 1: Bad, not good at all, should retry most of it atleast.

    Votes: 1 2.6%
  • 0: Very Bad, either give up, or redo it totally.

    Votes: 1 2.6%

  • Total voters
    39

Fire-Wolf

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Hello I've been working on this terrain for a while now, and I need some critique on it. It was hard to do, and took alot of time, so I don't want it to go to waste. The area is part of my upcoming Orpg, Cintio Orpg. This area is in and around the small town Erean. Well enough talk here is the terrain!

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[!OLD!]
Erean:
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Erean Forest:
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Erean Cemetary:
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Way out of Erean:
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Erean Farm:
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Entire Map:
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dragonhord

Knowledge is true opinion. - Plato
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Houses don't seem very realistically organized and some fences seem really close together leaving a very narrow gap, but generally it looks pretty good.
 

Chao

Setting sail for fail in the sea of lame.
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I'm not a great judge of terrain, I admit it, but here's the best I can tell you:

Since the map's not all that big, you shouldn't have too many problems, but be warned; the amount of doodads you have in front of those trees could get ugly in a larger map.

The town looks a leetle vanilla. Consider adding some barrels or troughs. It just needs some more village-y ambience. Other than that, nice job.
 

Fire-Wolf

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Thanks yeah fences are kinda closed up, and whats wrong with the houses?
EDIT: Fast replies guys, thanks if it gets too bad as the map gets bigger I'll remove some doods, and the town isn't finished I'm going to add shops and stuff, so I'll add barrels next to them.
 

Gtam

Lerning how to write and read!! Yeah.
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Could u maby go to WE and view entire terrain and hav a pic of that too
 

Gtam

Lerning how to write and read!! Yeah.
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Could use more props here and ther but other than that good job
 

Renendaru

(Evol)ution is nothing without love.
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Voted for the wrong option, meant 4. I like the terrain, but I'd like to see more nature.
 

Gtam

Lerning how to write and read!! Yeah.
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Ya birds maby some rabbits and boxes and garen with plants and tha
 

Fire-Wolf

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Okay, so more birds, more rabbits and gardens.
EDIT: But actually if you played it there is quite a bit of animals just not in the pictures.
 

dragonhord

Knowledge is true opinion. - Plato
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Thanks yeah fences are kinda closed up, and whats wrong with the houses?
EDIT: Fast replies guys, thanks if it gets too bad as the map gets bigger I'll remove some doods, and the town isn't finished I'm going to add shops and stuff, so I'll add barrels next to them.

The houses don't have a natural feel to them... Kinda just looks like you put them all together to fill up space... I don't really know what you should do to fix it... Just saying I don't like them all that much.
 

Chao

Setting sail for fail in the sea of lame.
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Honestly (and I know first-hand how wierd this is going to sound), put yourself in the civil engineer's shoes. What goes where in the town? :)
 

Fire-Wolf

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Well in midevil times there wern't civil engineers ;), especially in a tiny town like Erean.. But your right I should make them more realistic.
 

Chao

Setting sail for fail in the sea of lame.
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Well, you figure they'd build nearest water and on/around good land, not to mention high, if possible, to make it defensible.
 

Fire-Wolf

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they have a small pond nearby and a farm close also, they are good, they just haven't gotten around to cutting down some trees to make a closer path to the farm. And I havent finished the pond yet lol :D
 

Chao

Setting sail for fail in the sea of lame.
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So long as we've established that I'm not criticising! I'm here to help, homie. ;) I'll post some pics of my lil' farmtown when I get home.... we can work off each other.
 

TideOfChaos

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I quite like the texturing, but the trees are far to cluttered.
Make them start of not so thick and then get thicker and thicker, makes it a little more realistic.
Also, some of the doodads look a little spammed around the tree line. Remove a lot of them and spread them out across the empty areas.
Apart from that, it isn't to bad without any imports, and a lot better then other oRPGs I've seen.
 
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