Poem - The Past, Present and the Future

[jonadrian619]

This is my third poem. Actually referring about the Past, Present and Future. It's a cool poem. Here it is:

The past is written in history
Something that took place already
The past holds many things
Things that remind us of other things

The present is currently seen
Something that you can see, hear and feel right now
The present makes the past and gives way to the future
A time where many things are happening

The future does not exist yet neither written in history
But still it can happen in time
The future is a glimpse of all things taking place later
A time where destiny awaits us​

Please submit feedbacks and tell me whether it's good or bad.

 

[Halahan]

Again, its ok. I don't really feel much flow at all... regardless of rhyming, there has to be flow, rhyming is just a tool of that.
its not all bad, just work on that. 5/10 again.

 

[Zakyath]

No flow in it... 4/10