Poetry Contest 2!

Discussion in 'The Writer's Corner' started by Miz, Jun 26, 2007.

  1. TrustFactor

    TrustFactor New Member

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    i'm anxious to know who wins
    good luck everyone
     
  2. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    Alright, let's hear the results!
     
  3. DM Cross

    DM Cross You want to see a magic trick? Staff Member

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    Judges have until midnight tonight.

    If they don't post their results, they forfeit their judging abilities and I do it for them. One. Both. Don't matter. I'll do it.
     
  4. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    Sounds fair.

    I assume most people on this forum greatly anticipate the Seventh Book coming out tomorrow.
     
  5. Miz

    Miz Administrator

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    well I'll try to see the results but i maybe leaving early as hell tomorrow for championship again...
     
  6. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    WHy didn't you just post the results in that post? Krys going to? I thought you had the results ready.
     
  7. Miz

    Miz Administrator

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    Dude don't you know one of the most important rules (In my Rule book)
    is DON'T PISSED OFF SETH

    if I posted it and went against seth he would...
    Let me see,
    Most likely ban me
     
  8. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    ... Why would telling us the results make Seth mad?
     
  9. Miz

    Miz Administrator

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    Well he told me to give them to Krys and she would put them up
    He told me to do that
    But W/E now he wants me to post his results I guess I will
    I forgot what computer there on!
    Once i find them it will be posted
     
  10. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    Aight, didn't know that thanks.
     
  11. Miz

    Miz Administrator

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    Anyway
    Heres the results
    By My Judging

    1st Place (Tie)

    Would you? by Hortononon
    Emotion - 30/30
    Flow - 20/20
    Originality - 10/10
    Grammar/Spelling - 9/10
    Word Quality - 9/10

    Total: 78/80

    The Dangers of Love by Monsterous
    Emotion - 30/30
    Flow - 20/20
    Originality - 10/10
    Grammar/Spelling - 9/10
    Word Quality - 9/10

    Total: 78/80

    2nd Place

    Mer_de_Noms Entry
    Emotion - 28/30
    Flow - 20/20
    Originality - 10/10
    Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
    Word Quality - 9/10

    Total: 77/80

    3rd Place


    Fallen Love by Trustfactor
    Emotion - 25/30
    Flow - 20/20
    Originality - 8/10
    Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
    Word Quality - 10/10

    Total 73/80

    4th Place

    Blood and Fire by Jonadian619
    Emotion - 23/30
    Flow - 19/20
    Originality - 10/10
    Grammar/Spelling - 8/10
    Word Quality - 8/10

    Total: 68/80

    5th Place


    ...I... by Halahan
    Emotion - 18/30
    Flow - 20/20
    Originality - 10/10
    Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
    World Quality - 9/10

    Total: 67/10

    Last Place (Tie)

    Becoming by XXXconanXXX
    Emotion - 15/30
    Flow - 20/20
    Originality - 10/10
    Grammar/Spelling - 9/10
    Word Quality - 8/10

    Total: 62/80

    Rheias Entry
    Emotion - 13/30
    Flow - 20/20
    Originality - 10/10
    Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
    World Quality - 9/10

    Total 62/80
     
  12. Rheias

    Rheias New Helper (I got over 2000 posts)

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    > Last Place (Tie)

    Rheias Entry
    Emotion - 13/30
    Flow - 20/20
    Originality - 10/10
    Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
    World Quality - 9/10

    Total 62/80

    Can't say I didn't try. :p It was my first poem in English as well, oh well.

    > Emotion - 13/30

    Did you find it THAT emotionless? I guess it depends on how you look at it...
     
  13. Miz

    Miz Administrator

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    I knew this was going to come up :eek:

    Anyway
    Heres the major thing
    Your topic was about something that made you feel an emotion not an emotion itself
    Its alittle confusing but you just mixed up the topics

    Anyway you had a good try
    If the topic was something that made you feel this emotion
    You would get perfect score

    See didn't I tell you you were going to be shocked at the results?
     
  14. Rheias

    Rheias New Helper (I got over 2000 posts)

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    Well that's one way to look at the song, however when I wrote it I thought about the following (yes I thought about many depressing things which are cliches...)

    1) I tryed to think about lonlyness and repetiviness (is that a word?..) in the world.
    2) The sad opposites, death and immortally, and how no one wants to have either one, but when we born at the end we will reach one of them.
    3) And many more things which are hard to put into words...

    So, yes, few pcitures talked about what GAVE me the feeling, but while I did that I tryed to trasfer itself.

    I guess there are always other contests.
     
  15. Miz

    Miz Administrator

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    You never know
    I think Night did give you a high rating
    So you could get 2nd or 3rd
     
  16. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    Rheias should have won.
     
  17. DM Cross

    DM Cross You want to see a magic trick? Staff Member

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    Gah. Bloody Hell. I screwed up.

    We're giving Krys ONE more day, but because I did something stupid. I knew she wouldn't be available today/tonight, but it completely slipped my mind.

    She's currently at Borders, having a Harry Potter party o_O It's been coming for weeks, now. Gah, I'm such a twit -.-

    Yeah. One more day. Sorry guys.
     
  18. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    That' fine... but I thought they were going to combine there results and put them together as one? Oh well...

    How do you pronounce Krys? hortononon started an argument bout it
     
  19. hortononon

    hortononon "I give em the hip then I take it away"-Jim Thorpe

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    thnx mizo lol im much obliged but rheias is better than last, o well, im suspecting im host..

    if you know krys a nights judging scores why cant u just post it urself?:nuts:
     
  20. XXXconanXXX

    XXXconanXXX Cocktails anyone?

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    Last place. Wow.

    I really need to step it up.
     

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