Poetry Contest 2!

[TrustFactor]

i'm anxious to know who wins
good luck everyone

 

[Halahan]

Alright, let's hear the results!

 

[DM Cross]

Judges have until midnight tonight.

If they don't post their results, they forfeit their judging abilities and I do it for them. One. Both. Don't matter. I'll do it.

 

[Halahan]

Sounds fair.

I assume most people on this forum greatly anticipate the Seventh Book coming out tomorrow.

 

[Miz]

well I'll try to see the results but i maybe leaving early as hell tomorrow for championship again...

 

[Halahan]

WHy didn't you just post the results in that post? Krys going to? I thought you had the results ready.

 

[Miz]

Dude don't you know one of the most important rules (In my Rule book)
is DON'T PISSED OFF SETH

if I posted it and went against seth he would...
Let me see,
Most likely ban me

 

[Halahan]

... Why would telling us the results make Seth mad?

 

[Miz]

Well he told me to give them to Krys and she would put them up
He told me to do that
But W/E now he wants me to post his results I guess I will
I forgot what computer there on!
Once i find them it will be posted

 

[Halahan]

Aight, didn't know that thanks.

 

[Miz]

Anyway
Heres the results
By My Judging

1st Place (Tie)

Would you? by Hortononon
Emotion - 30/30
Flow - 20/20
Originality - 10/10
Grammar/Spelling - 9/10
Word Quality - 9/10

Total: 78/80

The Dangers of Love by Monsterous
Emotion - 30/30
Flow - 20/20
Originality - 10/10
Grammar/Spelling - 9/10
Word Quality - 9/10

Total: 78/80

2nd Place

Mer_de_Noms Entry
Emotion - 28/30
Flow - 20/20
Originality - 10/10
Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
Word Quality - 9/10

Total: 77/80

3rd Place

Fallen Love by Trustfactor
Emotion - 25/30
Flow - 20/20
Originality - 8/10
Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
Word Quality - 10/10

Total 73/80

4th Place

Blood and Fire by Jonadian619
Emotion - 23/30
Flow - 19/20
Originality - 10/10
Grammar/Spelling - 8/10
Word Quality - 8/10

Total: 68/80

5th Place

...I... by Halahan
Emotion - 18/30
Flow - 20/20
Originality - 10/10
Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
World Quality - 9/10

Total: 67/10

Last Place (Tie)

Becoming by XXXconanXXX
Emotion - 15/30
Flow - 20/20
Originality - 10/10
Grammar/Spelling - 9/10
Word Quality - 8/10

Total: 62/80

Rheias Entry
Emotion - 13/30
Flow - 20/20
Originality - 10/10
Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
World Quality - 9/10

Total 62/80

 

[Rheias]

> Last Place (Tie)

Rheias Entry
Emotion - 13/30
Flow - 20/20
Originality - 10/10
Grammar/Spelling - 10/10
World Quality - 9/10

Total 62/80

Can't say I didn't try. It was my first poem in English as well, oh well.

> Emotion - 13/30

Did you find it THAT emotionless? I guess it depends on how you look at it...

 

[Miz]

I knew this was going to come up

Anyway
Heres the major thing
Your topic was about something that made you feel an emotion not an emotion itself
Its alittle confusing but you just mixed up the topics

Anyway you had a good try
If the topic was something that made you feel this emotion
You would get perfect score

See didn't I tell you you were going to be shocked at the results?

 

[Rheias]

Well that's one way to look at the song, however when I wrote it I thought about the following (yes I thought about many depressing things which are cliches...)

1) I tryed to think about lonlyness and repetiviness (is that a word?..) in the world.
2) The sad opposites, death and immortally, and how no one wants to have either one, but when we born at the end we will reach one of them.
3) And many more things which are hard to put into words...

So, yes, few pcitures talked about what GAVE me the feeling, but while I did that I tryed to trasfer itself.

I guess there are always other contests.

 

[Miz]

You never know
I think Night did give you a high rating
So you could get 2nd or 3rd

 

[Halahan]

Rheias should have won.

 

[DM Cross]

Gah. Bloody Hell. I screwed up.

We're giving Krys ONE more day, but because I did something stupid. I knew she wouldn't be available today/tonight, but it completely slipped my mind.

She's currently at Borders, having a Harry Potter party It's been coming for weeks, now. Gah, I'm such a twit -.-

Yeah. One more day. Sorry guys.

 

[Halahan]

That' fine... but I thought they were going to combine there results and put them together as one? Oh well...

How do you pronounce Krys? hortononon started an argument bout it

 

[hortononon]

thnx mizo lol im much obliged but rheias is better than last, o well, im suspecting im host..

if you know krys a nights judging scores why cant u just post it urself?:nuts:

 

[XXXconanXXX]

Last place. Wow.

I really need to step it up.