Poetry Contest 6!

[DM Cross]

No explanations are needed. They may be requested at the end of the contest, though.

 

[Monsterous]

Are you allowed to change MINOR details? like misspelt words, or punctuation? (to used to Word's "error-finder"), or can we ask you to do it so it shows that we have not in anyway changed it and so it shows that you have changed it at our request.

 

[Rheias]

My submission.

Element to rule all

A book about many days
Dusty and forgotten, on a shelve lays.
It tells a story, long as time,
About a dreadful crime.

The end, the great fear
Of all heroes in all gear.
We are all doomed
Like a newly married groom.

Fire, wind, water, earth
All obey the one death.
Like a king to rule the land
Until the distant end.

Spring before the fall
Disappointment and pain to all.
Life before the death
The elements on the earth.

Is that horrible or just plain?
Beauty hand in hand with pain.
The meaning of life.
The elements of life.​

It's the first poem I ever did that rhymes .

 

[Ninva]

I enjoyed your poem, Rheias.

 

[Miz]

I enjoyed your poem, Rheias.

Same, its very nice of a poem

 

[Rheias]

Thanks for the comments.

I hope more people are planning to submit poems, I think we are still a few submissions short.

By the way, WankerOne was banned from the site and his poem was deleted, please remove him from the contestants list.

 

[DM Cross]

*Goes and looks at post 1* ROFL! Who put that there?!

Anyway, yeah. We're 3 submissions short of our second three award contest ^.^ We still have 4 contestants listed, too.

 

[DM Cross]

Halahan has been disqualified by his own account of disregarding the rules and disrespecting me for enforcing those rules.

His entry will not be judged.

 

[Demonwrath]

I will remember that...


Anyway I believe we need just 3 more entries in order to do 1st, 2nd , and 3rd.

Come on people! I want to see some more lovely poems

 

[1)ark_Knight]

Sorry for the inconvenience of me not lookign at this for a while.

I will be dropping out becuase I simply don't have much time in the day to do what I want anymore. I was planning on taking a while editing and perfecting a poem for this, but it seems I don't have time.

Sorry, and Good Luck to everyone else.

By the way, the poems I have read were really nice. Good job guys.

 

[Miz]

Sorry, and Good Luck to everyone else.

By the way, the poems I have read were really nice. Good job guys.

Hopefully you will join next contest

Anyway post more poems! Don't worry take the risk, we won't bite... Hard

Edited

 

[1)ark_Knight]

Ya, I'll most likely join the next contest. It's jsut at the moment I dont have a whole lot of time to work on it and I prefer a solid block of time to do it. So things should slow down a bit by the next contest so I'll cya all there

 

[Tharius]

10 days left to submit your poems.... we only need 3 more submissions to have second and third place awards.

They come in several great-smelling colors!

 

[Hatebreeder]

May I participate?
And, mind to explain a bit further about what Elements are?
Because, for me they are something that falls into material, Earth, Metal, Plastic, water, living creatures....

 

[Tharius]

May I participate?

Yes.

Explain a bit further about what Elements are?

No.

The topic for this contest is the elements. How you interpret that is entirely up to you.

 

[Ninva]

Four more days.

 

[Halahan]

lol I'm excited.

 

[Monsterous]

Looks like this is the last day
Good luck to everyone!

 

[Ninva]

Good luck everyone.