Poetry Contest

Mer_de_Noms

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Judging

-Judges: Seth_Cross, Krys_A_Night, Mizuio-Ken


-Rules:

  • You may submit any type of poem.
  • There is no limit on length.
  • Any theme is acceptable.
  • It must be one that YOU have written, and it can't be one that you've posted on this website previously. I would say that it has to be new period, but whos to say that you couldn't just post one that you've had sitting around for years and just tell us it's new, therefore making that pretty much impossible :p
  • Any copying of other member's poems, or copying of any previously-written poems will result in -reputation and disqualification. You will also be banned from any future poetry competitions.

Judging will be based on the following:

  • Emotion - Does the poem emit any kind of emotion, or make the reader feel a certain way? Or does it seem flat and uninteresting?
  • Flow - Does the poem have any kind of flow? Or does it seem choppy and hurried?
  • Originality - Have we all seen poems like this before? Or maybe you've created something fresh.
  • Grammar/Spelling - Is the poem legible and grammatically correct?
  • Word Quality - Do you use some interesting words to spice up your poem?
  • Visuals - Does your poem create a picture in the reader's mind?

-All of the judging criteria above will be judged out of 10 (10 being the best).


Prizes - +rep and a spot on Mizuio-Ken's empty wall space in his room (maybe with a printed medal thingy), and maybe one for you too via email :D

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Post here if you would like to participate.

Signups start today on May 22nd, and will ned on May 27th. The contest will start on May 28th and end on June 2nd. Judging will be complete on June 5th.

Anyone who has signed up may post their entry at any time between May 22nd and June 2nd. You don't need to wait until May 28th.

Good luck contestants! :)

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Contestants:
Mer_de_Noms
Andrewgosu
Halahan
Pyrogasm
 

Miz

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Shouldn't we give them more then 1 day to sign up because you said

The contest starts today on May 22nd, and will end on May 23rd

Also

Any copying of other member's poems, or copying of any previously-written poems will result in -reputation and disqualification.

And you may not be able to enter the other contest if you copy someones work
 

Miz

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I say alittle more time because the Writer cornor isn't like TheWorldEditor Help Zone where usually 83 people are viewing it will take atleast 5 days to a week for people to sigh up
 

DM Cross

You want to see a magic trick?
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Yes. Either written in English or comes with a translated version. I don't speak any other languages at all and Krys speaks a few, but not natively...
 

DM Cross

You want to see a magic trick?
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You're in. Get writin' ^.^
 

DM Cross

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But an entire poem like that?

It'd be huge and annoying to read. Just make two versions if you want ^.^
 

Miz

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lol I have no clue what I was thinking lol
Me (Wall is the computer)
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Mer_de_Noms

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My entry:

Celestial

A beauty of complete paragon
Motility of a seraph's intentions
A sin to wirship this icon
Every word spoken creates interventions
Dragging through typical advance
Modulation for all five senses
Eyes crude to observe this devil dance

Angelic formations of false pretenses
A clever muse for your true design
A misty facade for your complete persona
Every aspect of beauty made to intertwine
Combine to create a modernized Latona
Incapable to admit this perfection
Angels found in your ressurection
 

Miz

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Very nice Its my kind of poem its evil/misunderstood :D
Lets hope more post soon

The Winner will also be put on my empty wall space in my room (maybe with a printed medal thingy) and you will get one too :D (by email)
 

DM Cross

You want to see a magic trick?
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Let the inspiration begin, cause you're in!

Heh, that rhymed o_O Why am I a judge instead of IN THIS THING, MAN?! ;)
 

DM Cross

You want to see a magic trick?
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Let me know when you're sure and I'll add you to the list ^.^ Til then, just think about it. Better to leave ya til you're sure, right? Less work for me, puttin' ya up there and then takin' ya back down.
 

Pyrogasm

There are some who would use any excuse to ban me.
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Sure, I'll join.

And I've got lots of time to think of something...
 
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