and I like your idea on the fruit, but I dislike your rhyme scheme and the way you writ it. It may be a free-verse poem...so my comments might be useless but w/e.
A few things to consider:
1) your teacher might try to find ways to exploit this by saying something like "well, all fruit taste different". Your going to need to find a way to counter this in your poem (this can help take up more space).
2) I would recommend adding a rhyme scheme, but this is entirely your choice. I just personally prefer rhyme.
3) your teacher may ask "who is this owner you speak of" consider changing the word.
I liked the idea of it very much, but you should never forbid yourself to rhyme. You need to improve the flow, and rhyming is great for that. Ignoring rhymes is only good when you can keep the flow good too
It'll be good practice at least, I did a bunch of practice boards the last few weeks but that's a bit different than actual repair. It's pretty obvious what's going on with those, so it's not very hard to trace the leads, and they aren't designed with faults so
Site is peaking on traffic for the recipes - Sundays are always the big days and we are 200 plus unique visitors an hour right now and it will be like that probably be around 3000 total on the site all day maybe more if Google desires it LOL
Anyway I have a power bench that I don't actually know how to use, but I'm assuming I can take the battery out and power it directly from that to see if any of them turn on.
If you had kids like me that grew up in that era you could just go to your closet and fish out one of the cords from the cord bag. I bet I have everyone of those cord connectors plus some