and I like your idea on the fruit, but I dislike your rhyme scheme and the way you writ it. It may be a free-verse poem...so my comments might be useless but w/e.
A few things to consider:
1) your teacher might try to find ways to exploit this by saying something like "well, all fruit taste different". Your going to need to find a way to counter this in your poem (this can help take up more space).
2) I would recommend adding a rhyme scheme, but this is entirely your choice. I just personally prefer rhyme.
3) your teacher may ask "who is this owner you speak of" consider changing the word.
I liked the idea of it very much, but you should never forbid yourself to rhyme. You need to improve the flow, and rhyming is great for that. Ignoring rhymes is only good when you can keep the flow good too
Another issue I'm learning is that a lot of the air quality sensors don't work at very high ambient temperatures. I'm planning on heating this enclosure to like 60C or so, and that's the upper limit of their functionality
Although I don't know if I need to actually actively heat it or just let the plate and hotend bring the ambient temp to whatever it will, but even then I need to figure out an exfiltration for hot air. I think I kind of know what to do but it's still fucking confusing
I don't think I'm dealing with quite the same pressures though, at the very least its a significantly smaller system. For the time being I'm just going to put together a quick scrubby box though and hope it works good enough to not make my house toxic
I do know this - xenforo dropped the ball by not keeping the vbulletin reputation comments as a feature. The loss of the Reputation comments data when we switched to Xenforo really was the death knell for the site when it came to all the users that left. I know I missed it so much and I got way less interested in the site when that feature was gone and I run the site.