Porcelaine

[Krofttt]

Here is another poem i made awhile back.

Your my wisdom tree
Your concave soul shields me
lines curve
music swurves

You see
Your my protective bubble
Outside of it lies time
It deteriots your mind

Without you
I bleed inside of mine
I suffer and go blind
movements uncoordinated
stiff and slow

time goes by
and my body lets go

 

[Mahucharn]

Your a born poet! one question, Why is it in code wrap?

 

[Krofttt]

thankyou. im glad im good at something.

 

[Halahan]

Great! good how it all ties together.
Try to have a grasp of SOME kind of subject though. I'm guessing it was A seeing-eye dog.