To die will be an awfully big adventure.
Dude, if you expanded on that idea and included it later on in your story, I think it'd be fuckin' brilliant. By the way, I always thought you were older, Halahan, because you are a pretty good writer. Damn kids're gettin' to smart these days. I think it might be time for the harvest... enjoy your 'Sad Birthday,' bwahahahaha!Where as for me... this isn't a fantasy world. this is just the future, however odd that may seem. Where that spire rises up and where the Lites live is Earth... plain and simple.