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UnknowVector

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GROWL! you hid chapter 9 in another post so I missed it on my first check, comments/whatever to be added very soon (probley dinner first)

Nothing gramtical or spelling or whatever that I see.

btw that "w00t for Sandra" I said earlier? um yea... I don't even know what to say now... so "w00t? for Sandra"
 

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UnknowVector said:
btw that "w00t for Sandra" I said earlier? um yea... I don't even know what to say now... so "w00t? for Sandra"

Lol, meaning? :p
 

UnknowVector

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Shes confusing me now, I can't figure out her personality. Is she a succabus? Or just trying to freak Cyrik out?
 

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UnknowVector said:
Shes confusing me now, I can't figure out her personality. Is she a succabus? Or just trying to freak Cyrik out?

The latter. The more uncomfortable HE is, the more fun SHE's having...

Trust me, her personality is... Cemented in the next chapter... She'll remain the way I put her until the end of the book :p And beyond ;)
 

Nenad

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Excellent...

I <3 this story so much

Oh and Sandra seems to have a great personality just like Alexander :D
 

Rinpun

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Nice. Well, so far, my favorite characters are Alexander, Brant, and Sandra. No one else :p
 

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Rinpun said:
Nice. Well, so far, my favorite characters are Alexander, Brant, and Sandra. No one else :p

Gasp, you're not a Justice fanatic?!

There's a first.

Jindo said:
Yeah this story's pretty awesome, you thinking of getting it published? (when it's finished of course :p).

~Jindo

Yes, I hope to get all of my works published when I'm older.
 

Rinpun

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Justice is awesome, but the pointless sadism caused me not to like his character as much. Everywhere you see him torturing something...in kind of a 2d personality fashion (same reason why I don't really like Thomas...he's kind of 2d as well). However, his voodoo magic and his attitude minus the sadism is pretty cool.

Kind of a behavioral (but no different otherwise) opposite of Obi Wan from Star Wars, who though incredibly 2d, I happen to like as a character.
 

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Rinpun said:
Justice is awesome, but the pointless sadism caused me not to like his character as much. Everywhere you see him torturing something...in kind of a 2d personality fashion (same reason why I don't really like Thomas...he's kind of 2d as well). However, his voodoo magic and his attitude minus the sadism is pretty cool.

Kind of a behavioral (but no different otherwise) opposite of Obi Wan from Star Wars, who though incredibly 2d, I happen to like as a character.

WHOA, that's new. Usually, everyone LOVES the pointless sadism! :D

And actually, it's not pointless. Justice is a sadIST, so ... Ta da. Also, it's his job. He's supposed to torture the people Zaris puts in his control before just locking them up in one of his sadistic cells. (Surprise surprise, they're all his designs :D) He also interrogates them if they have information Zaris needs it.
 

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WHOA, that's new. Usually, everyone LOVES the pointless sadism!

And actually, it's not pointless. Justice is a sadIST, so ... Ta da. Also, it's his job. He's supposed to torture the people Zaris puts in his control before just locking them up in one of his sadistic cells. (Surprise surprise, they're all his designs ) He also interrogates them if they have information Zaris needs it.

All i like about him is his name which bassicly suits him quite right :).

Favourite Character's: Brant and Alexander. Sandra is still a mistery

Oh, and correct me if im wrong but theres no Elizabeth and Jessica in the chapter? That struck me as a little odd.
 

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LoL! Made it for fun :p (the face i found off google, and just messed with it (alot)).

~Jindo
 

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Nenad said:
Oh, and correct me if im wrong but theres no Elizabeth and Jessica in the chapter? That struck me as a little odd.

Actually, it's not as odd as you'd assume, lol. Jessica and Elizabeth were originally main characters, as in they were part of the main conflict of the series.

However, with the expansion of all the other books, you begin to see that the entire thing is about the evolution of Vampires, and it's all mostly about Alexander and Tyrale and actually THOMAS, of all people. Though he's not a HUGELY main character, he's ever-present. During this entire series, I will tell you this:

Thomas will never die.

~Jindo~

Cool picture :D I never really figured out what I wanted the art to be for the cover, but I shall keep that one in mind :p
 

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Don't know if it means anything to anyone, but the image off google isn't royalty free (doesn't normally mean anything to me :p).

Just an experiment, I'm gonna make more :p.

~Jindo
 

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I'm sure that if it gets published, whoever's publishing it can rope an artist to do a brand new picture, after that same one, lol.

Thus, there would be no problem. Nothing wrong with looking at ideas. :)
 

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I have that fire image in my avatar, o_o lol.

I like the second one better, it seems more interesting, but the hourglass realy seems to clash with the blured dark and fire, mabey put it in the background and blur it to black not white?
 

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It kinda looks like you're trying to sell it too much. I've always liked pretty simply covers, and anything with a lot of complex, or fancy stuff turns me away from the book in total.
 

Rinpun

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Dude, if that second one of yours was the book-cover for Corruption, Jindo, I would laugh for eternity. It looks so...lol :p
 
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