Sex and Pancakes

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DirtyJobs

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Smells of sex and pancakes and beer.
Tall grass and a shot of red in a dying landscape of untold fortunes.
RJ-45 tied in a purple haze and sweat and anguish and coleslaw.
50 cannons raging fire upon a peacefull village.
Plunder, rape, and soft spoken whispers,
Open cuts and closed doors.
Twisted bitch and skank upon a sea of golden roses.
Camels like to eat the sands of time.
George Bush and poison ivy.
Now is the time for nothing and something over again.
You are a cancer of this earth,
And I place my hate upon you.
Twist the nipple and spank the protractor.
Pleasure has overtaken math, with pain, combining forces.
Many pains start as pleasure.
Never follow your heart, love is a lie.
 

Miz

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WTF?
is my insanity not getting it ?
is it suppose to be funny am I suppose to post something?
is it spam???
WHY AM I ASKING SO MANY QUESTIONS!?!?!

But it is funny but I don't get it?
 

Halahan

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weird, makes no sense whatsoever. It sounds wrong..... there is no one point, and the similes and relations are very weird.

and love can't be true or a lie, unless your pretending you love someone. if you actually love them, it can't be a lie. its simply a desire.
 

Zakyath

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It's really, really hard to make abstractive writings good. Try just a little harder and you'll get there. I'm not saying it's bad, I just don't see any sense at all...
 

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Sex and Pancakes Reloaded:

Sex and Pancakes Reloaded:

Soft tissue torn on broken glass.
The pain is real, but the implants are fake.
It is time to reel in the fish, for the waters are too deep.
Your life has slipped behind you, and you will never catch up.
Pregnant cows burden broken farmers.
Vigorous sex celebrated with dark chocolate.
Your cellulite is many, but your beauty is little.
Beauty has many faces, but not one for you.

Your 401k is large, yet your manhood is small.
You are a victim of the system, and your eggs are never splendid.
Ejaculatory emissions flood the delta of tommorow's evergreen fields.
Granite mountains and cotton boxers.
Electrons propogate in the singularity of space.
The universe has infinite alternatives, but none is for you.
You are stuck in exsistence and in existence is where you are.

The Earth is warming yet your heart is cold.
Rays of viverant light bring clarity to the darkness of a well lit room.
Damp nipples harden quiet dreams.
Only corrupted men lay the rules of God.
Crack the walnuts and bake the cookies.
Your life is now and the time to live it has passed.
Quantum theory and shameless hamsters.
Never close your eyes for long,
Opportunites can be found.

CW.
 

Miz

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Yes I know Poetry is about Writers Freedom but I think theres a limit...
I find this Poetry Disturbing not the way its written just the topic...
I don't think its right for TH.net
You never know what age people could be
I say put on another site but not this one
 

Zakyath

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Why would there be a limit? Wouldn't it just be a good thing to cross it? The only one here who actually did something original...
 

Halahan

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Most of its fine, even if it is a little borderline, but the damp nipples and ejaculatory emissions is possibly a step to far. and the dark chocolate is a little stretch.
but good poetry
 
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