some questions for ya

[Halahan]

well, if he didn't, then he wasn't really his best friend was he?

 

[hortononon]

sorry Halahan i still cant,

thnx every1 ur great, and dont forget to read amaryllis, ill have chapter2 done soon, well not that soon cuz school starts tomorrow

but thnx

 

[Fatmankev]

well, if he didn't, then he wasn't really his best friend was he?

Some people harbor their emotions within themselves, even those spawned by the death of someone close. Some people cannot truly emote themselves as one would expect them to, although this character probably isn't one of those.

What I was trying to get at is that it would be really lame if the hero broke down and started mourning over the death of his best friend in the midst of a battle. As I said, if he ended up breaking down at the end, that would be fine, but I would avoid having him cry right off the bat.

 

[Halahan]

He can break down in a crying rage, but I agree if he just started weeping over the body that would be kind of a turn-off, but if 'tears ran down his blood-stained face as he' did stuff while crying, that would work.
It is good to show weakness in some characters though, or it isn't as interesting.
ANYwAY, Alright horton.