Nice colours, nice depth, great composition and interesting concept. The text is pretty good too, not sure if the red fits in though. About 230 degrees from the text, the bottom of the splatters, it looks bad because the splatter just cuts off horizontal.
Also, you might want to try a no splatter version, might look plain but you never know.
It would but I can also just make sure I can return them. The system I have works, it's pretty straightforward and I tested it with a camera I have. All it really is is a little cartridge that holds the transparency film and a white light source behind it that projects the image into the lens