The Chronicles of Night and Day

Discussion in 'The Writer's Corner' started by Miz, Apr 21, 2007.

  1. elmstfreddie

    elmstfreddie The Finglonger

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    I know there are humorous poets (heh ever read Tim Burton poetry? Funny stuff), but I'm talking about the "deep", and "meaningful" poetry. It's like, who cares! I'd rather have a good laugh than... Realize.
     
  2. Miz

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    Fine then don't post on my thread...
    If you want humorous peoms go to a different place and idk if theres any humorous peoms writen on the TH.net

    But if I do find any I'll post a link for you

    I hope I'm not mean :(
     
  3. Miz

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    Updation

    New Poem: Change
    Topic: Funerals
    Needs Rating!

    Added Writer's Board for Info on your Writers Corner and Check out others Poem Thread

    Fixed Star Problem
     
  4. elmstfreddie

    elmstfreddie The Finglonger

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    I kinda read them all and it depressed me =/
    Can't you write anything more happy?
    Oh, then I saw:
    Well, that's... Interesting...
     
  5. Krys A Night

    Krys A Night Writer

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    I like change. It really reflects how you feel right after someone dies and you haven't really gotten over the shock of not having them in your life day after day.

    I give it 4/5 stars.
     
  6. Miz

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    My Poem are Not EMO :mad:
    I have to ever written a Happy poem on feelings and let have a good rating
    Theses are my best poems... ok?
    My happy poems are just werid so of the poems aren't that depressing
    Divde Love and Memory....

    Does anyone read this its at the top of the poems 2nd line
     
  7. Miz

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    I thought I had a Topic but then lost it so you may not here a poem from me till next week but w/e you can wait lol :p

    800th Post Yay!
     
  8. Miz

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    Betrayal
    My new poem finally is here
    I wrote this while being baned from thehelper.net
    Hope you enjoy

    Night gave it 5 Stars on AIM so you are going to like it
     
  9. Miz

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    And I will have a new poem soon
     
  10. Miz

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    I finally put all these poems into one journal and I have now called my Poem Series (This one)
    The Chronicles of Night and Day
     
  11. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    Alright, so I caught up with some of the newer poems, and I'd have to say Betrayal is my favorite, since it conveys perfectly the confusion of feelings and such with that situation. And its all put very well into a nice poetic format.

    Change and Heartbroken are ok for you, good for any old poem.
    keep it up, your a great poetry writer.
    (I've read all your others, and I think commented on them, If I haven't I can read them again and edit this Reply)

    When's the next Poetry Contest? Possibly you could start a thread for discussion about it?
     
  12. Miz

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    Well I guess we can start the next Poetry Contest I'll talk with night
     
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  13. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    I was just thinking of a discussion about doing it and such, not necessarily the actual thing, but if you want to thats fine.

    but your poems are good.
     
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  14. Miz

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    Well me and night just both said w/e so i get to host this time ^^
     
  15. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    aight.
    Maybe I'll host it the next time : D
     
  16. Miz

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    I do have a new poem but sadly its a contest poem so it gets its own thread but check it out :eek:
     
  17. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    I'll read it some other time, bit busy at the moment.
     
  18. Miz

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    Sorry for not posting a poem yet but I have had alot of swim meets and not really gotten creative yet
     
  19. Miz

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    Well because people hate After-Time and I didn't put it in my Journal so I don't think it should be in here

    So I'm Putting the Head Poem for my Journal in here

    It is a 4 Paragraph long mess of poetry I hope you liek it
     
  20. Halahan

    Halahan To die will be an awfully big adventure.

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    For The Chronicles of Night and Day, the first paragraph has great rhythm and flow, but the other three aren't nearly as good. I say just take those out, much better just the first one. But I really like the first paragraph.
     

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