The Chronicles of Night and Day

elmstfreddie

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I know there are humorous poets (heh ever read Tim Burton poetry? Funny stuff), but I'm talking about the "deep", and "meaningful" poetry. It's like, who cares! I'd rather have a good laugh than... Realize.
 

Miz

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Fine then don't post on my thread...
If you want humorous peoms go to a different place and idk if theres any humorous peoms writen on the TH.net

But if I do find any I'll post a link for you

I hope I'm not mean :(
 

Miz

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Updation

New Poem: Change
Topic: Funerals
Needs Rating!

Added Writer's Board for Info on your Writers Corner and Check out others Poem Thread

Fixed Star Problem
 

elmstfreddie

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I kinda read them all and it depressed me =/
Can't you write anything more happy?
Oh, then I saw:
New Poem: Change
Topic: Funerals
Needs Rating!
Well, that's... Interesting...
 

Krys A Night

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I like change. It really reflects how you feel right after someone dies and you haven't really gotten over the shock of not having them in your life day after day.

I give it 4/5 stars.
 

Miz

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I kinda read them all and it depressed me =/
Can't you write anything more happy?

My Poem are Not EMO :mad:
I have to ever written a Happy poem on feelings and let have a good rating
Theses are my best poems... ok?
My happy poems are just werid so of the poems aren't that depressing
Divde Love and Memory....

Does anyone read this its at the top of the poems 2nd line
My Poems are based off Feelings and some of these maybe Depressing but please read the less depressing ones if you feel liek your becoming Emo
 

Miz

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I thought I had a Topic but then lost it so you may not here a poem from me till next week but w/e you can wait lol :p

800th Post Yay!
 

Miz

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Betrayal
My new poem finally is here
I wrote this while being baned from thehelper.net
Hope you enjoy

Night gave it 5 Stars on AIM so you are going to like it
 

Miz

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I finally put all these poems into one journal and I have now called my Poem Series (This one)
The Chronicles of Night and Day
 

Halahan

To die will be an awfully big adventure.
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Alright, so I caught up with some of the newer poems, and I'd have to say Betrayal is my favorite, since it conveys perfectly the confusion of feelings and such with that situation. And its all put very well into a nice poetic format.

Change and Heartbroken are ok for you, good for any old poem.
keep it up, your a great poetry writer.
(I've read all your others, and I think commented on them, If I haven't I can read them again and edit this Reply)

When's the next Poetry Contest? Possibly you could start a thread for discussion about it?
 

Halahan

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I was just thinking of a discussion about doing it and such, not necessarily the actual thing, but if you want to thats fine.

but your poems are good.
 

Halahan

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I'll read it some other time, bit busy at the moment.
 

Miz

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Sorry for not posting a poem yet but I have had alot of swim meets and not really gotten creative yet
 

Miz

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Well because people hate After-Time and I didn't put it in my Journal so I don't think it should be in here

So I'm Putting the Head Poem for my Journal in here

It is a 4 Paragraph long mess of poetry I hope you liek it
 

Halahan

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For The Chronicles of Night and Day, the first paragraph has great rhythm and flow, but the other three aren't nearly as good. I say just take those out, much better just the first one. But I really like the first paragraph.
 
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