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[skullkidd]

Rate out of x/5 please.
Which one is the best?

(i am just getting back into this, its been awhile)


[Edit] Took off to fix:thdown:


[Edit] put new ones on. Number one is the same, two and three are different.



#1 (same)

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#2

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#3

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[Sil3nt]

The render looks stretched.
The border is bad, doesn't suit it.
Same with the text.
The colors are dull and too monotone, a boring vibe.
It's probably brush+render+text+hue/sat so you shouldn't expect much out of it.
Overall, it's very bland with next to nothing effects that make it look eye catchy.

1/5. The 1 is for the effort.

/seriousfaceoff

Keep practicing and you will learn new techniques which will improve the quality of your works.

 

[skullkidd]

na its not stretched at all actually. and i never have used this shade before. but i think its good.
yah the border is bad. i rushed it

 

[undeadorcjerk]

The render looks stretched.
The border is bad, doesn't suit it.
Same with the text.
The colors are dull and too monotone, a boring vibe.
It's probably brush+render+text+hue/sat so you shouldn't expect much out of it.
Overall, it's very bland with next to nothing effects that make it look eye catchy.

1/5. The 1 is for the effort.

Sorry dude... i'm going to have to go with this. It pretty much sums it all up.

 

[skullkidd]

I'll see what I can do.

 

[esb]

The reason he looks 'stretches' is because he is kind of slanted. The render is like an angle shot. Then the background is straight, thus makes it look weird. So it doesn't really blend well.

Try to add effects over the render, else it looks like a background with a render ontop.
Try to add at least some color to the render, maybe just the color of his face-makeup, the other black and white or something.

Not bad, but can improve.

 

[skullkidd]

I edited them a bit. and re put them up.

 

[esb]

I choose the second one, as a single color doesn't do it for me

Try leaving the original color on his hair and makeup, and maybe slight color on the background effects and/or text.
His hair looks like a ball of fire.

 

[skullkidd]

ok so the background... like darken them or fade them.

 

[esb]

I meant some actual color...

 

[skullkidd]

i'll see what i can do

 

[Diablo185]

i like the second one. The first one is too boring due to its lack of color, and the thirs seems a bit stretched out...keep it up 4/5