To the One I Hate

[yami-joey]

To The One I Hate

You're everything I hate.
Your annoying voice; the disturbing noise
Your troubling radiance; your pestering arrogance
Your blinding pink hair; Oh, this life ain't so fair!
You make my life a living hell
Your pride--oh, the lies you always tell
Too self-assured, you're such a waste
All the other people upon seeing you make haste
You're everything I hate.
Your upbraiding attitude; Please, just leave me in solitude
Your voice it makes me want to run
Will somebody just shoot me with a gun
You're everything I hate, and yet...
Your bright, dazzling face; Something I just can't seem to face
Your uplifting smile, it holds me up by a mile
I don't know why
Your disorganized cheerfulness; seems to be a hidden sadness
Some sort of melancholy; somehow you're filled with agony
Perhaps you do this for one thing
A thing perhaps you have been missing
So clearly I state,
You're everything I hate.
But why do I feel this way?
Somehow...my heart doesn't feel grey.​

Comments are appreciated

This piece actually won 1st place in a club contest at deviantART. this one is the revised version.

 

[Ninva]

Very good. Work on your punctuation.

 

[Avaleirra]

Yes very nice! I like the rhyme scheme and the theme :thup:. +rep