Toy Battle Arena

[Razthemapper]

As in the Christmas map idea , i am making a Toy Factory but , with some battle! (too boring without battle , this is WARcraft III)...

Story: Each Christmas, the engineering goblins gather for a meeting. The guild named The Engineering Master's leader comes and creates this meeting. His announcement, the same as every year, is that out of 8 goblins, only 4 may move into The Engineering Master guild. In this contest, you are a Goblin, and you must teamwork, and guard your 'Toy Monument' from the opposing team.

Teams: 4v4

Objective: Destroy the opposing team's toy monument!

Finishing date: non-acurrate: Until Christmas Eve (it is a small project...)

I've attt's pretty good, but, Who knows...

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[Rad]

Cool, so you took the toy idea from that christmas project? Well sort of...

The terrain looks VERY bland... it looks like a sad attempt at a symetrical terrain. So do the toys that you make create a unit that attacks the other teams workshop? That would be cool!

Also , whats with you typing like this... I mean commas dont have spaces , like that! lol

 

[Razthemapper]

I did not want the second part symetrical yet... And, i suggested a part of the toy factory idea and morxel said about the arena fight... The workshop sounds good but i think a 2v2 battle is good atm, but, i'll add the workshop in a later version. The thing is, i don't want the second part symetrical... Only those "arrow" or "triangles" or what they are with marble tile should be symetrical (and they're not...), the rest of the cliffs, walls, trees, doodads in the second half should not be symetrical. Oh, and also, did i exagerate with the doodads?
And sorry about spaces on commas (im not english)

 

[Rad]

It makes no sense to have fire on the cliffs... I dont really see where people get the idea to do that anyways loll

 

[DDRtists]

It makes no sense to have fire on the cliffs... I dont really see where people get the idea to do that anyways loll

Maybe hes trying to get his point across that his maps on fire :nuts:

 

[Razthemapper]

I'm remaking the second part and removing birds+fire, will exchange the screenshot soon...

 

[morxel]

hey not bad map so far.. might wanna add some chrissie decoration which can be found on the first/second page of the Christmas Map thread Good luck with it

 

[Razthemapper]

Thanks loads... The terrain is done but i'm lazy to post it atm... I'll post it later ...


EDIT: New Terrain Screenshot posted. Is it better now?
EDIT: I'll cut the lanes in 2 soon so i can have 8 players

 

[Razthemapper]

Hello, anyone here? I edited the post so the thread icon didn't change... Please rate new terrain and story

 

[Lizidian]

Meh... since i didnt see the first one i cant say anything about a comparison except that its looking good and keep up the good work

 

[Razthemapper]

Thanks... The first one was really bad. I found out after testing it with a unit. The bunches of trees in the corners are hiding spots. A unit can pass behind those bunches to hide. Could be useful for a sneak attack on enemies that are attacking your Toy Monument

 

[what666said]

This is a great idea, sadly your terrain really takes away from the map (I'm not trying to offend you here don't take this badly). Basically, when I look at a map atleast, the first thing I really notice is the terrain. Depending on what the map is precisely, the terrain can really take away a lot or add a lot to the map itself.

In maps where the action is very fast-paced, such as that one solo TD that runs non-stop, you have to be thinking non-stop and there's no time to see terrain. But in a map like DotA where you don't do too much half the time you really notice whether the terrain looks good. I recommend working a bit more on your terrain, add some hills or something, some different tiles (all snow gets boring), that kind of thing.

 

[Razthemapper]

Ok... I'll work some more on the terrain... Hills and other tiles. Might add some more doodies as well. I'm on it!