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Miz

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Oh ok never thought about that...I suppose i can make it longer weird it seemed long enough when i wrote it on paper. And thats 2 1/2 pages. Alright long it shall be. I'll edit the first post when i have time.

Simple, really because the computer makes smaller lines, words and spaces. You can fit more in one line.

Really just this post is: 63 Words
 

BANANAMAN

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There i made it slightly longer.


I think me listening to some dragon force and linkinpark did me some good. :p
 

BANANAMAN

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Bump. I'm thinking of naming the book into "A World divided" Any thoughts on this?
 

thewrongvine

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Well... that's up to you. That sounds interesting but imo too unoriginal, so make it more... original.

Next chapters soon? :)
 

BANANAMAN

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meh im only gonna put upto 3 chapters online here since ima try and get this published. I'm currently having writers block. I'll update the first page when i come up with something.

Any suggestions for the book's title?
 

Fatmankev

Chef, Writer, and Midnight Toker
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Eh. Not that great. Lot of information in a very short period of time, and the large block of text is very dissauding. I'm surprised that anyone had the patience to read it in that format... it took me about a month of looking at it for me to finally read it. I wouldn't get my hopes too high about publishing this, because I have seen much better stories get turned down straight-out. But, as I said in another of your threads, start reading more and your skills will only improve. Writing more is not guaranteed to improve your writing skills because you can just keep writing yourself under the table since they aren't up-to-par, and you will only make yourself an increasingly worse writer. Or better, it could work both ways. But seriously, just read some more.
 
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