I posted this about a year ago when I was first working on it. I recently went through and did a more thorough revision and edit, changing some sentences around and trying to make it more fluid. Anyway, this is more or less a final version of the story and I thought I'd throw it up here, maybe get some comments from people who are not related to me, which currently accounts most of the people who have read it. 27 pages, some 14,000 words. I think a few people have read the other versions when it was a WIP, but for those that haven't, this is basically a love story about two teenagers and the fallout their short-lived relationship.