Spell Circle of Fire

[XxShadyxX]

Well it is a ultamite.... so anyway what else needs to change besides the ground effect?

 

[Furberg]

It amazes me that you are not willing to modify the spell on what we (The Forum) suggestes you should. After-all the most important thing is what we want in the spell right? Because the more we like it, the more +rep you get.

 

[DarkSonicele]

I can see you have been asking for some comments, so here is mine. About the spell, the channel time should be shorter, the ground effects would work fine if it where there for less than 2 seconds or when the final effect comes, but since he's channeling for over 10 seconds, it just looks dumb. And if you want your title you should also fix all of your leaks. Also, the "spell presentation" aka the first post should be easier to read, something like this:

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<Name>

MUI/MPI:
Leakless:
Difficulity:
GUI/JASS:

Description:
<Description>

Short explanation:
<Short explanation what it does, if description isn't sufficient>

Screenshots:
<Screenshots (In a spoiler if they are large like yours, but best if they're 800x600)>

Variables
<Variables>

Triggers:
<Trigger>

<Small personal comment>

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Filled example:

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Twisting Nether

MUI/MPI: MUI
Leakless: Yes
Difficulity: Easy
GUI/JASS: GUI

Description:
Unleashes a part of the twisting nether around the Nether Prince weakning nearby enemies and causing them to lose health every second. If an enemy dies within the nether, its corpse is transformed into a Void Walker

Short explanation:
Creates a black stationary effect at the feet of the caster. All nearby enemies will then lose health and become a void walker if they die near the effect.

Screenshots:

Spoiler

Images (Sorry, don't have any)

Variables:
Temp_Point1
Temp_Point2
Temp_Point3
NetherEffect
NetherUnit

Triggers:

Spoiler

Haven't made this spell, so no triggers. Sorry.

If anyone ever makes this spell, please atleast mention me.

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Yeah I have too much time to post like this.

 

[XxShadyxX]

Ok. Thank you this is my first spell
@furburg what are you talking about? This is why I am asking for comments! To make te spell better and make it so other ppl like it better?

Anyway should I like just remake the thread? Like restart it?

 

[Furberg]

Anyway should I like just remake the thread? Like restart it?

Nono, just edit the first post mate. Or else the moddies will get very angeri

 

[XxShadyxX]

alright just asking first this time! Should I ask them?

 

[Furberg]

alright just asking first this time! Should I ask them?

eerh, ask them what?

 

[XxShadyxX]

if U can remake this thread. I want to change the name too. Plus all the code is different now....

 

[Tyman2007]

is that really necessary?

If its an almost completely different spell make a topic about it.

It its just a few changes edit the first post.

 

[Draphoelix]

It leaks. (Dunno if you fixed it, but that's what your first post tells me)

 

[XxShadyxX]

hmm? It doesn't leak?
Oh yea i fixed it.. I didn't put in code cuz ppl skip it anyway... and go straight for map
thx for the comments :thup:

 

[Caedin88]

hmm? It doesn't leak?
Oh yea i fixed it.. I didn't put in code cuz ppl skip it anyway... and go straight for map
thx for the comments :thup:

Update the code, alot of people just read the code and comment based off of it, b/c it takes time to download then open the map in WE then test it. Btw I didn't look at the map, or the code, but the screenie looks nice! +rep!