GrayveXP

[rappunk23]

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[MisterFrank]

The text doesn't seem that easy to read, and there's too much green. And looks like you used 1-3 brushes in it.

You should add some different colors and a variety of brushes to it.

 

[ElderKingpin]

i read the signature. And. its grammatically incorrect T_T

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Anyway. Too much green is a big no-no X_X. And it might just be me, but who in the world is that guy? He looks so out of place in the signature.

 

[thewrongvine]

The text doesn't match with the background or the character, and is a bit hard to read, heh.
I think the background is cool and fits in with the person, but they blend in too well so it takes the focus out of the person.

~Hai-Bye-Vine~

 

[Romek]

The background looks like just a single fractal.
The render looks like a low-quality Mii or something.

The render and background are entirely different styles, and clash like a lit cigarette and an eyeball.
The red text has a terrible bevel effect on it which makes it terribly difficult to read. This is another clash in styles. The red font doesn't help either.

I'd suggest only using brushes and fractals to enhance a background, rather than making a background consist of solely that. Also, try to pick a higher quality render, and smudging it to make it blend a little.
Don't put simple 3-colour renders with complex backgrounds.

> I think the background is cool and fits in with the person, but they blend in too well so it takes the focus out of the person.
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[Rhymer]

clash like a lit cigarette and an eyeball.

ouch

Well, pretty much what romek said.

Cheers;
//Rhymer

 

[Romek]

> What you said is basicly putting everything else everyone said together.
I don't think so. Well, whatever you say. I was giving my opinion on the sig. In fact, I didn't actually look at other posts before replying, only after.