Need help with french

Jedimindtrixxx

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Well my french teacher was away today, so i was unable to get my work proof-read, and i have to hand it in on monday, so i was wondering if anyone here who can speak french would be able to proof read the following for spelling and grammer mistakes. It's supposed to be a book ressembling a childrens book, but our theme is monsters, so its not really a childrens book....(each new paragraph is a new page)

any help would be greatly appreciated.

Un jour, Missa Supaman, un grand monstre, est sorti son habitat. Il a habité a la forêt magique, mais il est entré notre monde par utilise la porte magique.

Missa Supaman est très gentil. Il aide son amis quand ils ont besoin d’aide, et il donne les objets à personne qui besoin ce. Il n’est pas méchant. Il est plus grand que son frère, et il est athlétique. Il est curieux et il explore tout.

Missa Supaman est venu de la forêt magique, un lieu de créature mystique. Il est né dans une caverne, quel est dans la forêt magique.

Quand Missa Supaman a trouvé la porte magique, il a traversé dans la terre, et parce qu’il est curieux, il est parti en exploration.

Après quelque temps, Missa Supaman a trouvé une maison, et il était faime. Il a atteint pour les personnes avec son deux longues griffes, et après il a mangé les personnes.

Les policières a arrivé au lieu du crime, mais Missa Supaman a commencé courir. Le policière a dit « Zut ! Il est plus rapide que mon l’automobile ! »

En attendant, Missa Supaman’s père a cherché pour Missa Supaman. Il a demandé la domestique mexicain, qui s’appelle Consuela, mais elle dit « Noo… Missa Supaman no here… »

Missa Supaman a court de les policières, et il est revenu au foret forêt magique, où son père était attente.

Missa Supaman’s père a puni Missa Supaman, et les policières a détruit la porte Magique.

Après, tout les personnes et monstres ont vécu heureux toujours, excepté les personnes qui étaient mangé.

Thanks in advance.
 
Cornface

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Let me check.
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Ah, there we go.
 
NightShade

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my french sucks, so I'm can't really help. and I'm having trouble getting accents to work.

my french teacher normally directed me to this site if I didn't have anyone who could help me. it give suggestions instead of outright corrections, so it may say that a verb isn't conjugated right, but you'll still have to conjugate it yourself.

what was that cornface?
tu est un con!
jk!
 
Rapmaster

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overall pretty good... mostly you have some issues with using the right verb tenses, masculin-feminin relationships (I mean in grammatic sense, in verbs!) and singular-plural. In other words the mistakes that everyone makes, even real French people. Sometimes you forgot the preposition (words like in, for, of - or dans, pours, de in French)

Un jour, Missa Supaman, un grand monstre, est sorti son habitat. Il a habité a la forêt magique, mais il est entré notre monde par utilise la porte magique.

Missa Supaman est très gentil. Il aide son amis quand ils ont besoin d’aide, et il donne les objets à personne qui besoin ce. Il n’est pas méchant. Il est plus grand que son frère, et il est athlétique. Il est curieux et il explore tout.

Missa Supaman est venu de la forêt magique, un lieu de créature mystique. Il est né dans une caverne[del], quel est[/del] dans la forêt magique.

Quand Missa Supaman a trouvé la porte magique, il a traversé dans la terre, et parce qu’il est curieux, il est parti en exploration.

Après quelque temps, Missa Supaman a trouvé une maison, et il était faime. Il a atteint pour les personnes avec son deux longues griffes, et après il a mangé les personnes.

Les policières <---this is correct as long as all the police are female... a arrivé au lieu du crime, mais Missa Supaman a commencé courir. Le policière a dit « Zut ! Il est plus rapide que mon [del]l’[/del]automobile ! »

En attendant, Missa Supaman’s Nice try but 's is an english thing! :) père a cherché pour Missa Supaman. Il a demandé la domestique mexicain, qui s’appelle Consuela, mais elle dit « Noo… Missa Supaman no here… »

Missa Supaman a court de les policières, et il est revenu au [del]foret[/del] forêt magique, où son père était attente.

Missa Supaman’s père a puni Missa Supaman, et les policières a détruit la porte Magique.

Après, tout les personnes et monstres ont vécu heureux toujours, excepté les personnes qui étaient mangé.
 
Jedimindtrixxx

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thx for the help. i wulda lost tons of marks if not for this. now i just gotta print it and put it together in a book. [sarcasm]Yay[/sarcasm]
 
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