Poster WIP Concept

[BlackRose]

Hello.

I have an assignment in which I must create a poster to promote a worthy cause, I chose Teenage Drinking / Underage Drinking.

Alright, the concept is using 'crime type photos' or whatever they are

But I need it to be a short, easy to read, and straight to the point poster. So how is spamming the photos with a word underneath of the possible stuff of Teen Drinking under it?

Spoiler: Current Poster

 

[Bloodcount]

Lookin' good so far. maybe add some alchohol bottles in the background ?

 

[thewrongvine]

Looks cool so far.
I like the pictures idea.
The "Teen Drinking" font seems too strict to fit drinking in my opinion.
The "Danger" sign should be like 100% filled, as it's a blunt and urgent message that labels what teen drinking is.

~Hai-Bye-Vine~

 

[BlackRose]

Lookin' good so far. maybe add some alchohol bottles in the background ?

I'll probably consider it after other things.

Looks cool so far.
I like the pictures idea.
The "Teen Drinking" font seems too strict to fit drinking in my opinion.
The "Danger" sign should be like 100% filled, as it's a blunt and urgent message that labels what teen drinking is.

~Hai-Bye-Vine~

No idea what font to use. But done the other things.

 

[thewrongvine]

This font fits nicely I think,
Getting better and better, lol.
This is more like an OCD thing, but the "fines" picture seems too straight and close to the info box, but I'm just like weird about that, so...

~Hai-Bye-Vine~

 

[BlackRose]

EDIT: Fix'd to make better. Has a little but of information, but not overboard. Opinions?

 

[thewrongvine]

I like it. The pictures all faded and stuff match with the "it can make you see differently". I would say keep the last line inside the box.

~Hai-Bye-Vine~

 

[Rhymer]

Looks pretty good. I find it very similar to the posters in my school, so obviously it's good enough to acually produce

Nice job, mate;
//Rhymer

 

[Darthfett]

IMO, for the text:

Drinking causes you to see
things differently, it can make
you do regretful things. It alters
your judgement.

Underage drinking is illegal.

Underage drinking is trouble.

Would look better as:

Drinking causes you to see
things differently, it can make
you do regretful things. It alters
your judgement.

Underage drinking is irresponsible.

Underage drinking is illegal.

It being illegal is probably the biggest point; they can get in trouble with cops for it.

 

[BlackRose]

I think trouble fits the word, as it covers illegal and irresponsible.

You can get in trouble with the cops for having alcohol, but you can also get in trouble for possible type of things [assault, rape, or whatever].

I really dunno, if I were the viewer, "illegal" would make me want to stay away from it, but "danger and trouble" somewhat makes me feel the "it'll never happen". Unsure :O

But I guess the teacher isn't gonna go that critical, seeing this is only 1/4 of the parts of my assignment.

 

[iPeez]

burn this shit, tough some might get violent while drinking. D:
I think it needs more shape and structure. Right now I am not sure where to place my eyes at the first. Skip the glow, use 3D shaping and light. Find a font that fits the posters theme. If you want to use glow to create some sort of "BANG!" effect, then pick matching colours.
For the pictures. That car does not look like it has been into a crash or anything. Assault and fights are awesome, go to encyclopedia and search offended, scroll down and use the picture of the old guy with suit from USA.

Those people (or two guys) at the Assault picture, are way over 18. And some countires allow drinking from the age of 16

I am not flaming! xd