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Because if the kangaroo was just gonna keep going at the same pace he was, he wouldnt make any ground on the hunters, but still get tired. If he used whatever energy was left to sprint he could lose them. But drought effected lakes can be

woops, typo, cheers.

Ninva, thanks for that quick reply. Have you ever tried to creep up to a sleeping animal, only to have it wake up when you get close? Thats what happened. Could you point out where I made mistakes (apart from lower case "i"s which i am aware of) EDIT btw its a kangaroo, not a joey. (look at...

As Arcane mentioned before, the dialog is sounds a bit childish, and saying the spells aloud doesn't help much either. But i liked it. It was an interesting read but i wouldn't read much more then a short story of this type. Also "I look down at my watch. Five seventeen, not much left...

This is my first short story here, hope to post more later: The Pursuit Charging forward, I could hear the steps of my pursuer close behind. Almost tripping, I leaped across the Murray river, drought had almost dried this once mighty river up, and another summer like the one we're in now will...