I think the spacing is nice. Although you could do more to balalnce it out. Add more complex stuff on the left region. And I think it needs a transparent border in front of the bg and behind the render and text. I don't like the font either.
Okay, go back to blue one, add that brush on it, set it to soft light and lower opacity to about 43% then dupe it. That would make blue one MUCH! better Imo, but they both look good, I like the glossy effect.
Ghan has said he has fixed this. Monovertex please confirm this fix. This was only a problem with people that had signatures in the upper levels like not the special members but the respected members.