Free Flow

[Analyze]

Free Flow

Free,
I flow,
on rivers,
pulling many
rocks along the shore.
I smoothing roughened rocks
while streaming down the delta.
Canals, I traveled through. The line.
I watched the dim horizon fading.
The greatest sunset. Rays on the backdrop.

 

[Ninva]

I liked the flow. You should proof read your poem though, and every line starts with a capitalized word.