Some tooltip writing help

[Verrak]

Ok i got a ability called BrainFreeze, its purge that stops the unit for 5 seconds followed by a 5 second slow, and removes mana.

"This unit is Brain Freezed; it has had all buffs removed(or somthing cold-related?), mana(taken/frozen/burned i dont know what to use) away and is frozen in place for 5 seconds followed by slowed movement.

 

[Azlier]

Erm, do you want us to revise the tooltip or write a new one?

New:
This unit is affected by Brain Freeze. The magical frost removes all other magic, freezes the mind draining mana, is frozen in place for five seconds, and is slowed for five seconds after the ice is melted.

Revision:
This unit's brain is frozen. All buffs are removed, mana is drained, frozen in place for 5 seconds, followed by 5 seconds of slow.

 

[Verrak]

short n sweet i like it, thanks